Author Topic: rus gayi a sohni nikki jini gal to (Read 2883 times)

@@JeEt@@ · « **on:** June 29, 2010, 02:06:48 PM »

rus gayi a sohni nikki jini gal to

kehnde nae bulauna mainu kal to

mai kiha sohneo kal ta kade auna nae

kive mann lava tusi mainu bulauna nae

sun k sawaal mera oh sochdi rahi

kinni der tak jawaab lochdi rahi

fir na oh boli na mai bas chup jihi shaa gayi

bhulle gile shikve dona nu te haasi jihi aa gyi

us puchea je kismat nu kuj hor manzoor hoya

ki karenga je tera pyaar taitho door hoya

tu sochi na jatt dunia to darr jauga

teri khaatir maaruga kise nu ja aap v mar jauga

oh kehndi haye ve channa teri aayi mai mar jauga

teria sariaa balaava mai apne naam kar jawa

fir na oh boli na mai bas chup jihi shaa gayi

bhulle gile shikve dona nu te haasi jihi aa gyi

Punjabi Janta Forums - Janta Di Pasand · « **on:** June 29, 2010, 02:06:48 PM »

Sardar_Ji · « **Reply #1 on:** June 29, 2010, 02:10:53 PM »

nice bro keep it up

@@JeEt@@ · « **Reply #2 on:** June 29, 2010, 02:13:08 PM »

22 g

Kudrat Kaur · « **Reply #3 on:** June 29, 2010, 07:41:51 PM »

Wahji Wah..Nice aa..

ajj fer ik sad valon..

baan farke rok lainde
je chalda koi zor hunda

aseen tere pichhe kyon painde
je tere warga koi hor hunda :happy:

@@JeEt@@ · « **Reply #4 on:** June 30, 2010, 03:48:25 AM »

kudart g bhut he vadiya g

prabhleen · « **Reply #5 on:** June 30, 2010, 04:36:57 AM »

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww reallyveryvery very nice nd sweet its. :omg:.

@@JeEt@@ · « **Reply #6 on:** June 30, 2010, 04:46:30 AM »

praboooooo

_尺oยภคк_ · « **Reply #7 on:** June 30, 2010, 05:00:51 AM »

haye main marja kina sohna 8->

@@JeEt@@ · « **Reply #8 on:** June 30, 2010, 05:20:03 AM »

marn lai ta likhea nai c asi ronak g

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*rAbh RaKHA* · « **Reply #9 on:** June 30, 2010, 05:32:38 PM »

ve ranjhna teri aye mein marja tera baal vi vinga na hove :love: :love:

nice ravv keep it up

@@JeEt@@ · « **Reply #10 on:** July 01, 2010, 11:34:49 AM »

eh ranjha kaun :love: :love: :love:

joban jit hundal · « **Reply #11 on:** July 01, 2010, 11:54:13 AM »

Beeba munda but beebay kamm kar veer . . . .
Eh jo to likhea eh meri poem dia lines wa veer . . . . . . .
Thanks 4 promoting it veer g

@@JeEt@@ · « **Reply #12 on:** July 01, 2010, 11:56:23 AM »

hahahahahhahahahah koi na tu ta kite aaj dekhi aa mai ta kai jaga eh post kiti aa ki pata tu kitho copy kar k apni bna lai

^_^ ωαнℓα ^_^ · « **Reply #13 on:** July 01, 2010, 11:59:28 AM »

Bhtttttt sohna aa. . . . .Pad k mainu v hassi jahi aa gayi

@@JeEt@@ · « **Reply #14 on:** July 01, 2010, 12:01:27 PM »

hahahahahhaha chalo hassa ta aya

joban jit hundal · « **Reply #15 on:** July 01, 2010, 12:37:00 PM »

rus gayi a sohni nikki jini gal to
kehnde nae bulauna mainu kal to
mai kiha sohneo kal ta kade auna nae
kive mann lava tusi mainu bulauna nae
sun k sawaal mera oh sochdi rahi
kinni der tak jawaab lochdi rahi
fir na oh boli na mai bas chup jihi shaa gayi
bhulle gile shikve dona nu te haasi jihi aa gyi

us puchea je kismat nu kuj hor manzoor hoya
ki karenga je tera pyaar taitho door hoya
tu sochi na jatt dunia to darr jauga
teri khaatir maaruga kise nu ja aap v mar jauga
oh kehndi haye ve channa teri aayi mai mar jauga
teria sariaa balaava mai apne naam kar jawa
fir na oh boli na mai bas chup jihi shaa gayi
bhulle gile shikve dona nu te haasi jihi aa gyi

oh kehndi das bhala mere ch aisa ki jo tu takda a
sachi dil; ch wasaaya ya aive parde ch rakhda a
mai kiha ki kara tareef teri tu har paaseo sohni a
ni tu pari jaape mainu teri har adaa manmohni a
tu hi mere dil di rani a tainu kidda yakeen duaawa
je tu hukam deve ta mai dil cheer dikhawa
fir na oh boli na mai bas chup jihi shaa gayi
bhulle gile shikve dona nu te haasi jihi aa gyi

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beebay munde ah meri apni likhi hoyi poem wa mainu dujeaa di cheej copy kar ke apne naam te likhan da shauk nae
je hor kise nu proof chaahida ta ethe click kar ke aap vekh lao
veer copy jo marji kar par usde naal usde original writer da naam jarur likheaa kar

@@JeEt@@ · « **Reply #16 on:** July 01, 2010, 12:39:57 PM »

hon mai v punjabi janta tu copy kar k kite v laga dena fer meri ho jau vaise mai v copy kiti aa but ik gal kaha eh dona sites tu nai kito hor jitho tusi kiti hou :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

joban jit hundal · « **Reply #17 on:** July 01, 2010, 12:43:56 PM »

http://punjabijanta.com/profile/Jobanh/?sa=showPosts;start=80
ethe click kar ke vekh lao jinne vekhnaa

vaise kehnde nakal ch v akal chahidi wa ........... tenu vekh ke mainu bandar wali kahani yaad aa gyi.......hahahahahah
mere kolo odo galti naal jaugi di jagah jauga likhea gya c te tu usnu ose traa copy kar ke paste karta hahahahahahahahahh
nahi reesaan teriaaa hahahahah

@@JeEt@@ · « **Reply #18 on:** July 01, 2010, 12:46:12 PM »

hahahahhaha galti :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

mann ja k copy kita :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

joban jit hundal · « **Reply #19 on:** July 01, 2010, 12:51:01 PM »

hahahhahah tu mannda kyu nahi k mai aap likheaaa wa.............
vaise tu jhithe marji post karde ihnu......... tu meri poem chori kar sakda par mera talent ya ideas nae........wen all else is lost knowledge still remains wid u eh line shayad tu suni hovegi hahahahahah vaise v jatt shauk naal likhdaa wa is lyi koi fark nae paindaa mainu...........tu jo v kar rihaa ode naal ultimately mainu hi pyaar mil rihaa bcoz i m the creator...........wadiaa aa tu free ch mera promotion kar rihaa hahahahah
vaise v jisde lyi mai eh likheyaa c usnu ptaaa wa ke eh mai likhyaa and isto wad mainu hor kuj nae chaahida hahahahaha

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