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Pyar de Dushman bann jande ne loki - Sahib
« on: April 22, 2012, 07:26:16 AM »
khabar parh ajj akha naal dil v roya
ik vaar fir ajj pyaar da katal hoya
pata ni kyu pyaar de dushman ban gaye lokki
raste vich pyaar de pathar ban addd gaye lokki
munde kudi da pyaar
shuru to e chadyaa na kadi parwaan
bahut munde kudiya pyaar vich kar gaye apni jaan kurbaan

gharro bhajj veyah krwa laya munde kudi ne
jaane anjaane sare jamane nu dushman bna laya apna
jari na gayi kise to khushi ohan di
dekh na hoya wasda ghar dhee apni
maar golli pyaar de badle maut ditti
kho khushiya ghar wasan to pehla hi ujaad ditaa dhee apni da

pyaar krke koi galti ni krda
anjaane vich gharo bhaj dushman bna laya lokka nu
par kade koi ni smjhda kis kaarn karke
oh aihe kadam chukk lainde ne
darra dahmka rakhya jnda ohna nu
sada dharm ki saddi jaat ki aihe
dhakkke naal thopya janda ohna te
apni is jhuthi shaan ..juthi ijat nu bacuan lai
munde kudi di khusuan nu maar maukunde ne

jis ijat jis shaan da oh hawaala dinde ne
ki hamesha li usnu bachaa paunde ne ?
kithe jandi a aihe ijat pohna di
jad kudiya nu kukha vich mar maukunde ne
nai veyhi duhan nu ...
kuch k daaj di khatir jinda jalunde
ya fir sooli chad dinde ne
kithe hundi  ijat ohna di .
jad 20 saal di kudi nu
50 saal de bande naal vehunde ne ?
koi aihe nahi sochda
koi apni soch kyunahi badal da ?


manya k hun generation gap aa
ajkal jaman baki e advance aa
par maa peo nu v aihe gal samjhni chaihdi aa
khushi kudi munde di brdashat karni chaihdi aa
darun dhamkaun di vajayee koi sidha raah kadhna chaihda
apas vich gal karke koi pakka hall kadhn chihda
love marriage nu v oh arrange vich badal sakde ne
fokki shaan jhuthi ijat nu ik passe rakh
jawaaka diya khushiya ware sochna chaihda

shuru to khud sikhde te apne jawaaka nu sikhunde ne
pyaar hi dharm hai te dharm hi pyaar a
aihe hamesha ee path parahunde ne lokki
fir akhir kyu us pyaar de dushamn ban jande ne lokki /
kadi nahi sochde j asi draa dhamka na rakhiye oh
kadi na bhajj k veyah krwaun
j asi ohna nu ik waar suniye te kdi ijat nu dag na laun
 


koi kujh ni khonda koi kujh ni paunda
lokka di ijat te shaan lai
do ghar ujjad jande ne
ik maa apna put kho dindi aa
ik kudi apna ghar wasan to pehla
tuttda hoya vekh laindi aa
ik munda jo kudi nu khush rakhna chuhnda aa
end vich maut nu veyhaunda aa

sach e keh kise ne
pyaar galla nahi ...kurbaani mangda
zehar peyanda te sooli tangda
« Last Edit: April 22, 2012, 10:37:00 PM by ©odєnamє 47 »

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Pyar de Dushman bann jande ne loki - Sahib
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Re: Pyar de Dushman bann jande ne loki - Sahib
« Reply #1 on: April 22, 2012, 10:38:32 PM »
Bahut sohna likheya veer ne

Mai ehna da topic banaya ehna ne menu bhej dita si msg ch

very nice thought and good presentation in the poem

hope sare jane esnu appreciate karange.
apni ego nu laah ke parhna jo veer mere ne likheya and dassna kive da lagga


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Re: Pyar de Dushman bann jande ne loki - Sahib
« Reply #2 on: April 23, 2012, 01:18:32 AM »
Heart-touching lines!!  =D>
awesome wording!

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Re: Pyar de Dushman bann jande ne loki - Sahib
« Reply #3 on: April 23, 2012, 01:19:20 AM »
i dnt under stand one thing is that
aj kal loki pyar de ene dushman kyun ban gye aa
aj kal koi kyun nhi banda kise da hamdard
koi nhi kyun kise de pyar di kadar or respect nhi krda
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Re: Pyar de Dushman bann jande ne loki - Sahib
« Reply #4 on: April 23, 2012, 01:25:21 AM »
omg eh ki likhiya main pani pee avan fir read karagi  :woried:

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Re: Pyar de Dushman bann jande ne loki - Sahib
« Reply #5 on: April 23, 2012, 01:35:27 AM »
hye rabba ehnu v meriyan emo lines chngiyan nhi lggiyan hun nhi main kujh likhna
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Re: Pyar de Dushman bann jande ne loki - Sahib
« Reply #6 on: April 23, 2012, 01:41:20 AM »
i dnt under stand one thing is that
aj kal loki pyar de ene dushman kyun ban gye aa
aj kal koi kyun nhi banda kise da hamdard
koi nhi kyun kise de pyar di kadar or respect nhi krda
:sad: :sad:
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Re: Pyar de Dushman bann jande ne loki - Sahib
« Reply #7 on: May 11, 2012, 08:12:42 AM »
sachi bai bahut sohna likheya majaak di gall ni gall v sahi a :)

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Re: Pyar de Dushman bann jande ne loki - Sahib
« Reply #8 on: May 11, 2012, 08:15:18 AM »
sachi bai bahut sohna likheya majaak di gall ni gall v sahi a :)

shukriya veer




hn veer jad mjaak krde a oh gal vakhri a k bahut magjh maari da  but mainu aidaa likhna bahut pasand a kai topics te likhya a ... aithe sare post v kite aa
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