raje ki ehe hale incomplete ya  complete

ya fr pura post ni krna chounde....


likheya boht hi wdia aa

Well my friend i can go on and on with this but some ppl fall in sleep reading long shayari so i stop writing long one now this completed one... Thanks but kade kade kuch advise v de daya karo ke assi lok koi benfit le sakiya.. tuhanday kolo........

kahdi advice laddoo
main kehri advice de skda tohanu
main smjeya ni tusi ki keha..::lost::lost::

Na khushyai de tu sanu,,,,
Sadiya liya ton gam he baitheriaya ne…..
Zandgi jeeyon le sadiya jo sath jo meriya ne….

Daar nahi lagada hun tufaana too,,,,
Pathar ban chukiya jo jajabaat jo meriaya ne…..

Jeeta gaya har bazi assi hun,,,,
Haran le sadiya koll bachiya hoiaa kujj hanju jo ajj main keray ne…..

Please do write some comments bcoz ppl who write will know where they can do imporve......

Thanks

=D> =D>

sorry but jus adding couple of lines here..if u dun mind..

je suna kadie vi kahani kisse pyar di
eng laghda jive hondian gallan terian merian ne
rudd jave na kite pyar sada eh keho jahian chalian hanehrian ne
ve ek vari mudh ke aa ke vekh tan sahi heer kardi ajj vi uddekan terian ne
ohnu ajj vi uddekan terian ne



sorry g je kujj glat keha hove