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Mere sir karz ne bathere
« on: March 21, 2009, 03:06:30 AM »
Mere sir karz ne bathere, kis kis da mul chukava main.
asi turde aj vi lash vangu, jina ne jaan payi kive unha nu bhula main.

Maa ne menu seene la ke rakheya, duniya di nazra to bacha ke rakheya.
God ch menu sulaundi si jo, hathi apne roti khilaundi si jo.
Kive karza chukava unha sukha wali neend da??

Peo ne menu bada kuch sikhaya, galat rah to hamesha bachaya.
Ungla fad ke menu chalunda si, thakan te kandhe ute ghumaunda si.
Kive karza chukava main us ghode wali savari da?

Bhena ne menu bada khidaya, rondeya nu hamesha hasaya.
Maava to ghat nhi si jo mere lyi, aj yada bachpan di sataundiya ne.
kive main karza chukava hath ch ch banni us rakhri da?

Bhaiya nal kiti badi ladai, par ghut ghut ke jafia vi payi.
Bhave tym nhi hun katheya rehan da, par dil vich hamesha rehnde ne.
karza kive chukava unha nal judiya yaada da?

Dosta ne hamesha sath nibhaya, apne nal main har vele khrote paya.
Hun nhi rhe oh dost purane, bhave kade kade milde ne.
Par kive karza main utara jo mere layi si jo ladaiya ladi unha ne?

Rab to bas eh mangda ha main, sab vapis menu mil jave.
Karje jinne mere ute oh sare hi lath jave.
Maut v mangle bhave, marke main dikha dunga,
karze hetha dabeya nadeem maut nu gal v la lega.

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Mere sir karz ne bathere
« on: March 21, 2009, 03:06:30 AM »

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Re: Mere sir karz ne bathere
« Reply #1 on: March 21, 2009, 06:51:02 AM »
nadeem jee bohat sohna likhea..... par plzz thora daso k ehe kehde valo keha gea a...... i mean tusi kehde dil di gall kiti a...... vese sachi sachai jei aa ehe...ma peo da karja ni chuka sakda koi v......


main ni chuka sada kade v tusi v nai koi v nai....... menu yad aa main jado chota si bra bimar rehnda si..muma sonde ni si sari raat kio k hospital ch nurse son ni si dendi si..... ona ney raat mere sarane bethna swere ghar jana papanu roti deni te fer mere kol aa jana.......... akha lal hundian si ona dian 15 din ehi halat si..ona akha da dard odo nai samjhda si chota si odo,,,par hun samjhda wa...... o akhan jado menu hassde dekhdian ney odo kuch hor hundian mere dukh ch kuch hor e hundian ney..

peo v eda e ta karda chahe keh na pawe o kuch v chahe ghut k jaffi ch na le pawe tuade dukh ch ro na pawe....par ohdian akha ch v ohi sab kuch dikhda menu...bass lor hundi a ona ch dekhan di...jo aak kal de munde kurian ghat e karde ney


thanks nadeem jee tusi ethe a shear karke menu moka dita maa peo bare kuch kehan da......... hug:) hug:) hug:)

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Re: Mere sir karz ne bathere
« Reply #2 on: March 21, 2009, 10:20:38 AM »
THX DEV JI

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Re: Mere sir karz ne bathere
« Reply #3 on: March 21, 2009, 12:42:42 PM »
ede ch thnks na keha karo aashqi te shear likho gey dev tarif kare jinna marji thanks kareo....... par ethe thnks na kaho......... hug:) hug:)

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Re: Mere sir karz ne bathere
« Reply #4 on: March 21, 2009, 01:02:23 PM »
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Re: Mere sir karz ne bathere
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