Author Topic: Kyun??? ........................by ur NashiLi_Jatti( i wrote it plz reply) (Read 4909 times)

« **on:** May 31, 2008, 08:53:22 PM »

kade palka te bitonde neh lokhi,
kade mitti vich milonde neh ohi lokhi.
pata nahi kyun jhoot bol k apne app nu sache kyun khende neh lokhi?
pata nahi kyun raha te phulla di jaga te kande kyun besaunde neh lokhi?
pata nahi kyun ishq vich waffa de naam te bewaffi kyun dende neh lokhi?
pata nahi kise nu badnaam kar ke appne te maan kyun karde neh lokhi?
pata nahi "NashiLi_jatti" wargia kuria da mazak kyun banaunde neh lokhi?
pata nahi kyun enj karde neh lokhi?
pata nahi kyun? pata nahi kyun?....pata nahi..... lost:)sad;> sad;> sad;> lost:)

i ill love to read ur bad or good comments...
ur replies will encourage me write more some thing good.....
mein sab da dhanwaad kardi a tusi meria phelia saria poems nu pyaar detta hope agge v dende raho ge. plzz meinu comments zarror devo..mein kis tera apni shyeri nu better kar sakdi a.

Punjabi Janta Forums - Janta Di Pasand · « **on:** May 31, 2008, 08:53:22 PM »

« **Reply #1 on:** May 31, 2008, 08:58:34 PM »

kach diya kankra nu mishri si jaaneya
ishq che aneya ne tenu ni pehchaneya
galan mithia che aa geye
laggi pyar wali bhukh si
tera sade jeha dil hunda
ta fir kahda dukh si break:) sad;> break:)

jattboy1 · « **Reply #2 on:** June 01, 2008, 06:35:48 AM »

lai bai kadran na yaari ke apni v kadar gawa bethe...

PuNjAbAn_KuRhI · « **Reply #3 on:** June 01, 2008, 06:53:12 AM »

o jatti sisu niceeeeee jattboy1 nice linee

╞→Ʈ৸ę ਦੇਸੀ ਜੁਲੀਅਟ←╡ · « **Reply #4 on:** June 01, 2008, 06:31:18 PM »

Kadde Chubbe Na Yaar De Ek Kanda,
Meri Zindagi Kandeya Di Raah Hove,
Kadde Sirr Vich Hove Na Dard Ohde,
Mennu Chadeya Bukhaar 104 Hove,
Mennu Aa Jaave Maut Tey Gham Nahin,
Lambi Umar Ohdi Saal Hazaar Hove,
Kadde Aave Na Hanju Akh Vich Ohde,
Mere Naini Bhaave Dariya Hove,
Kadde Aave Na Ohnu Yaad Saadi,
Ohnu Yaad Karda Mera Har Saah Hove,
Mein Maraan Taa Oh Beshaq Naa Kol Hove,
Par Meri Aakhri Umeed Ohda Deedar Hove..

PuNjAbAn_KuRhI · « **Reply #5 on:** June 01, 2008, 08:21:07 PM »

woooooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww sisuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu ncieeeeeeeeeeeeeee

╞→Ʈ৸ę ਦੇਸੀ ਜੁਲੀਅਟ←╡ · « **Reply #6 on:** June 01, 2008, 08:30:37 PM »

thanks sis

╞→Ʈ৸ę ਦੇਸੀ ਜੁਲੀਅਟ←╡ · « **Reply #7 on:** June 01, 2008, 08:31:24 PM »

Yaar russya tey manauna penda eh
Apne dil nu vi thoda samjhauna penda eh
Jey manaaya vi na manne yaar kisse da
Horr ki "Dil" cheer ke dikhauna penda eh

PuNjAbAn_KuRhI · « **Reply #8 on:** June 02, 2008, 08:16:25 AM »

sad;> sad;> Laugh;) Laugh;) Laugh;) wow nice nice shears a tusi khud likhe ne??

╞→Ʈ৸ę ਦੇਸੀ ਜੁਲੀਅਟ←╡ · « **Reply #9 on:** June 02, 2008, 07:09:12 PM »

nana ah wala chori da C hehehe par thora jaha fix kita a HEHEheh

« **Reply #10 on:** June 02, 2008, 07:49:27 PM »

ahhhha nice onee

PuNjAbAn_KuRhI · « **Reply #11 on:** June 03, 2008, 09:49:29 AM »

Laugh;) Laugh;) Laugh;)cool jattti sisuuu shukar a tusi wi pic change kiti nahi te aiwe dra dende c hih hih hih

╞→Ʈ৸ę ਦੇਸੀ ਜੁਲੀਅਟ←╡ · « **Reply #12 on:** June 03, 2008, 10:05:06 AM »

ਸੱਚੀ-ਸੁੱਚੀ ਗੱਲ ਮੈਂ ਕਰਦਾ,
ਮੈਂ ਦੱਸਾਂ ਸਭ ਸੱਚਾਈ.
ਝੂਠਾ-ਝੂਠਾ ਮੈਨੂੰ ਲੋਕੀ ਕਹਿੰਦੇ,
ਗੱਲ ਸਮਝ ਨਾ ਆਈ.
ਔਗੁਣ ਬਹੁਤ ਨੇ ਮੇਰੇ ਅੰਦਰ,
ਏਨੀ ਰੱਜਕੇ ਭਰੀ ਬੁਰਾਈ.
ਕੋਈ ਨਾ ਮੈਨੂੰ ਤੱਕਣਾ ਚਾਹਵੇ,
ਤਾਹੀਂ ਸਭਨੇ ਨਜ਼ਰ ਘੁਮਾਈ.
ਹਰ ਗਲਤੀ ਦਾ ਮੈਂ ਹੀ ਦੋਸ਼ੀ,
ਬਿਨ ਪਰਖੇ ਸਜ਼ਾ ਸੁਣਾਈ.
ਸਭ ਗਲਤ ਸਮਝਦੇ ਨੇ ਮੈਨੂੰ,
ਇਹ ਗੱਲ ਮੈਂ ਪਰਤਾਈ.
ਮੂੰਹ ਤੇ ਕਿਸੇ ਨੇ ਕੁਝ ਨਾ ਕਿਹਾ,
ਸਭਨੇ ਪਿੱਠ ਤੇ ਛੁਰੀ ਚਲਾਈ.
"ShAnNo" ਦਿਲਾਂ ਨੂੰ ਤੋੜੈ,
ਇਹ ਕਹਿੰਦੀ ਸਾਰੀ ਲੋਕਾਈ

PuNjAbAn_KuRhI · « **Reply #13 on:** June 03, 2008, 10:23:48 AM »

w39: w39: w39: w39: nice sisuuuu niceeee shear hehe

u knw menu ki ni pasand if koi shear likhe wich apna naam hih hih hih hih hih hih hih bt nice hehe dnt mind k main a keha lolzzzz

╞→Ʈ৸ę ਦੇਸੀ ਜੁਲੀਅਟ←╡ · « **Reply #14 on:** June 03, 2008, 10:45:35 AM »

hahahahah jo cheej tuhanu nai changi lagdi oh manu bhot pasand a ahahahhahahaha

PuNjAbAn_KuRhI · « **Reply #15 on:** June 03, 2008, 11:22:19 AM »

hih hih hih hih hih lolzzzzzzzz

╞→Ʈ৸ę ਦੇਸੀ ਜੁਲੀਅਟ←╡ · « **Reply #16 on:** June 03, 2008, 11:25:56 AM »

oh samjhdey ne asi khush ha reh k duur ohna ton, oh ki jaanan k asi tut k chuur ho gaye.....
kayi waar puchhi asi wajah ohna ton, per pta nahi aakhir kyu oh saathon duur ho gaye???
pyar ta ohna v kita a bepnaah saanu, ise layi ta o maar k v saanu bekasoor ho gaye,
main keha karo maaf j reh gayi koi kmi pyar ch mere, oh jandi waar bhriya akhhan naal kehndey asi majbur ho gaye......
ve rabba ds de saanu v aisi kehdi pa diti tu majburi ohna nu ???????
jehda chhad k oh saanu kisey hor diya akhian da noor ho gaye............

sukhbeer · « **Reply #17 on:** June 03, 2008, 05:29:00 PM »

Quote from: Nashili_Jatti on May 31, 2008, 08:53:22 PM

kade palka te bitonde neh lokhi,
kade mitti vich milonde neh ohi lokhi.
pata nahi kyun jhoot bol k apne app nu sache kyun khende neh lokhi?
pata nahi kyun raha te phulla di jaga te kande kyun besaunde neh lokhi?
pata nahi kyun ishq vich waffa de naam te bewaffi kyun dende neh lokhi?
pata nahi kise nu badnaam kar ke appne te maan kyun karde neh lokhi?
pata nahi "NashiLi_jatti" wargia kuria da mazak kyun banaunde neh lokhi?
pata nahi kyun enj karde neh lokhi?
pata nahi kyun? pata nahi kyun?....pata nahi..... lost:)sad;> sad;> sad;> lost:)

i ill love to read ur bad or good comments...
ur replies will encourage me write more some thing good.....
mein sab da dhanwaad kardi a tusi meria phelia saria poems nu pyaar detta hope agge v dende raho ge. plzz meinu comments zarror devo..mein kis tera apni shyeri nu better kar sakdi a.

hmmmmm jey aap likheaa taa sohna likheaa

ਅਮਨ ਪੰਨੂ · « **Reply #18 on:** June 03, 2008, 07:30:43 PM »

hahahahaha mama sukhi athe anne time kahde kol jahde app likha.... bas anne hi buhat aa je copy paste mari jaan. so sadde varge vi par linda aa.
sainu ta ahh nai patta lagde ahh aunde kitho aa. but jitho vi aunde aa hunda vadhiya hahaahhaahaha...

keep it up guys.

« **Reply #19 on:** June 03, 2008, 10:46:33 PM »

LI SACHII GUYZZ I WROTE IT break:) break:)

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