Author Topic: Kee dasan gal os kudi di... Its true story (Read 7095 times)

Tezy_Sandhu · « **on:** September 09, 2008, 03:20:52 PM »

Jive kahnde aa na ke jo banda karda ohda fal bande nu jaroor milda. Te sayad mainu v mere kite di sja mil rahi aa. Hoya is taran kee jadon main india c jaane anjane main ek kudi de pyar nu thokar mar baitha. Os kudi di life ch baad ch bahut problems aayi par main kuch nhi kar sakiya ohde layi siway eh poem likhan to... Te koshish kiti kee poem rahi apni galti da ehsas karan...
Kee dasan gal os kudi di nhi jihda sath nibha sakiya...
Yaadgar jahi banke rah gayi na kho sakiya na pa sakiya...
Door baithi oh buk buk rove na hanju pujan ja sakiya...
Risteyan de vich aisa uljaya na apne kol bula sakiya...
Door khadota rah gya takda dard ek v na wanda sakiya...
Kee dasan gal os kudi di.....
Oh te ek phul c najuk duniya ne pathar mare ne....
Ohne fer v c na kiti sab haske dard sahare ne...
Pathar wajde ta main dekhe par na pathran kolo bacha sakiya...
Kee dasan gal os kudi di.....
Dukh osne jhale ine main kuj v suna sakiya...
Jakham duniya ne dite ene kee main marham v na la sakiya....
Dardan da ek geet ja ban gya na sun sakiya na ga sakiya...
Kee dasan gal os kudi di...
Gunahgar ohda sda e rahina chahe kini bhul bakhsha lewan...
Chahe fer main jogi banja chahe mala gal vich pa lewan...
Par bhes wataya nhi kuch hona Tezy je na dard wanda sakiya...
Kee dasan gal os kudi di nhi jihda sath nibha sakiya...
Yaadgar jahi banke rah gayi na kho sakiya na pa sakiya...

Punjabi Janta Forums - Janta Di Pasand · « **on:** September 09, 2008, 03:20:52 PM »

Pυηנαвι Sιηgн Sσσямα · « **Reply #1 on:** September 09, 2008, 09:34:46 PM »

ki dassa yaar mere kol lafz hani
duniya de vich jo kujh v ajj tak paria mein apni zindgi vich ohna sab toh different a
may be is vich jaan a ik sacha dard hai

mere kol sachi yaar lafz hani

os kudi di rooh di jalak penni a is vich

Tezy_Sandhu · « **Reply #2 on:** September 09, 2008, 11:35:13 PM »

Jas 22 g bahut bahut thanx tuhada eni tareef karan da. 22 g is poem da ek ek word sacha main apne mano ek v word add nahi kita. Main te sirf word kathe karke poem da roop dita.
Thanx again

~PunjabiKudi~ · « **Reply #3 on:** September 10, 2008, 12:50:06 PM »

bahut he wadiya likhya.
je ish poem nu hun koi wadhiya jaye tang naal gave.
ta fir koi ress he nai. sachi bahut he sohna likhya aa. gd job sandhu ji. =D>

KUDI _CANADA_ DI · « **Reply #4 on:** September 10, 2008, 12:55:42 PM »

sat sri akaal sandhu ji.....main kal di neh comment ne kitta cuzz mainu pata ne cc lag rehaa kidda tareeff kara mere kol sachi lafazz hainiigeyy...bohat sohna likhiyaa ji... :-bd :-bd

Nadeem · « **Reply #5 on:** September 10, 2008, 01:12:48 PM »

YAAR MAIN KI TARIEEF KARA MAIN TA EHHI KEH SAKDA KEH CHOUTAA MOUNH AHH TA WADHII GAL AA TUCE GREET GREET OU VERY NICE JI

Tezy_Sandhu · « **Reply #6 on:** September 10, 2008, 02:01:49 PM »

Yaar main kade sochya v nhi c kee meri tuti futi shayri nu kade ena pyar milu kise da. Bas ek tuhada sab da pyar e aa jo dil khush kar dinda. Nadeem, punjabi kudi & preet bahut bahut thanx tuhada sab da.

PuNjAbAn_KuRhI · « **Reply #7 on:** September 12, 2008, 03:27:24 PM »

O WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW TEZY BOHUT HI WADIYA LIKHEA AND NICE K TUSI LIKHEA NAHI TE KAYI MUNDE TE HURT KARKE KE JANDE BANDE KURHI RONDI REH JANDI AND TUSI OHDE BARE SOCHEYA AND A KUJH LIKHEA OMG BOHUT HI WADIYA LIKHEA IK ANOKHI HI POEM A LYK US KURHI DA SARA DARD OHDI DUKHI RUH IS POEM WICH DIKHDI A PARHDE PARHDE PATA LAGDA A U KNW TOOOO GOOD KEEP IT UP WOW

SRY MAIN AJJ LATE POST KITA MAIN AJJ HI SAHI TARAH AYI US DIN DI BT REALLY NICE =D> =D> :-bd :-bd :-bd :-bd

Tezy_Sandhu · « **Reply #8 on:** September 13, 2008, 10:53:19 AM »

Punjaban tuhada bahut bahut thanx kee tusi eni tareef kiti. Yaar ohdi life ch jo v dukh aaye oh kise hor wajah naal aaye jithon tak meri soch aa jo main kita eh na karda te sayad ohnu hor v dukh dekhne painde. Par fer v pta nhi kayon inj lagda jive oh har time apne ek ek dukh da hisab mangdi aa te mere kol koi jawab nhi. Hor te kuj kar nhi sakda eh sochda kee likh te dawan kuch ohde naam te. Ek hor poem likhi aa ohde layi rab age ardas oh v jaldi tuhanu padan nu milu.

Tezy_Sandhu · « **Reply #9 on:** May 18, 2010, 07:18:05 PM »

Ajj bhuli wisri kahani yaad aayi e...
Bade dina picho mar jani yaad aayi e ...

Kudrat Kaur · « **Reply #10 on:** May 18, 2010, 07:30:20 PM »

whao...mein ajj pehli vaar padhi aa poem..and I can say i have read this kind of perspective for the first time....
Tusi apni poetry di koyee book publish karvayun bare nai sochia kade Tezyji..je nai sochia U shud really think abt it..really bade hi different way naal sochde ho tusi..

Tezy_Sandhu · « **Reply #11 on:** May 18, 2010, 09:32:02 PM »

Kudrat g salah te bahut dostan ne diti eh but i think im not ready 4 this yet. Coz i think k book publish karwa k main paisa n naam te kama sakda par eh pyar nai milna tuhade warge dostan da. Thats y i dnt want think bout book. Anyway thanx

« **Reply #12 on:** May 18, 2010, 10:31:34 PM »

bht vadia g

Tezy_Sandhu · « **Reply #13 on:** May 19, 2010, 08:42:13 AM »

Thanx Bagga g

*rAbh RaKHA* · « **Reply #14 on:** May 19, 2010, 06:51:15 PM »

hayeeeeee

Deleted User · « **Reply #15 on:** May 19, 2010, 07:00:58 PM »

soo sadd

Tezy_Sandhu · « **Reply #16 on:** July 30, 2010, 12:19:26 PM »

Bade dina pichho mar jani yaad aayi e

♥(ਛੱਲਾ)♥ · « **Reply #17 on:** August 01, 2010, 10:30:44 AM »

Vere bht sahi te vdiya likhia ah..
Mere kol ta kujh reha nae kehn nu..
Bs ehi kahuga.. Jehda apa nu pyar krda ohnu pyar krna chaida hai..

kirat sandhanwali · « **Reply #18 on:** August 01, 2010, 10:52:47 AM »

jnaab ..me just read karda hunda c shayari is site te ..te ajj tuda likhea padhea te bas specially tuhanu ehi dasan lai account bnaea ki...bada kaim likhea a..mere ko v words nai a....ki dasan me ...u r d best ..keep it up...!!!and mainu help karo ..me nawa aea aithe ...kidan proceed kara?....

Tezy_Sandhu · « **Reply #19 on:** August 02, 2010, 05:12:44 AM »

Kirat 22 sab to pahlan te thanx meri shayri di eni tareef karan layi... tuhada most welcome aa pj te, je tuhanu koi help chahidi hove te tusi mainu ja kise v mod nu kah sakde aa ja fer help ch jake topic bna dayo koi na koi jaroor help karuga. enjoy ur stay @ pj...

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