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Re: tere naam
« Reply #760 on: September 23, 2016, 11:41:16 AM »


hummmm very nice khaas taur te ae wala sher :

Muddat huyi hai Koo-e-butan ki taraf gaye,
Aawargi se dil ko Kahaan tak bachaye hum...

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Re: tere naam
« Reply #760 on: September 23, 2016, 11:41:16 AM »

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Re: tere naam
« Reply #761 on: September 25, 2016, 09:34:13 PM »
Hujoom main tha woh khul ka na ro saka hoga,
Magar yaqeen hai ke shab bhar na so saka hoga,

Woh shaks jis ko samajhne main mujh ko umar lagi,
Bichar ke mujh se kisi ka na ho saka hoga,

Laraztay hath, shikassta si ddor sanson ki,
Woh khushk phool kahan tak piro saka hoga,

Mere liye woh qabeelay ko chor kar ata,
Mujhe yaqeen hai yeh us se na ho saka hoga..

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Re: tere naam
« Reply #762 on: September 27, 2016, 12:31:38 AM »
Kujh Bol Aisa Jisnu Sunke Mainu Nasha Hove
Tu Mil Jave Mainu Je Manzoor-E-Khuda Hove
Kyun Jawan Mandiran Ch
Te Kyun Main Poojan Khuda Nu
Hun Nhi Manzoor Mainu Ke
Tere Bina Koi Hor “Mera Khuda” Hove

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Re: tere naam
« Reply #763 on: September 27, 2016, 05:29:52 AM »
Tumhare sheher ka mausam barra suhaana lage,
Main ik shaam chura loon agar bura na lage,


Tumhare bas main agar ho to bhool jao humen,
Tumhen bhulaane main shayed mujhe zamaana lage,


Hamare pyar se jalne lagi hai ik duniya,
Dua karo kisi dushman ki baduaa na lage,


Na jane kya hai us ki be-baak ankhon main,
Woh mu chupaa ke jaye bhi to bewafa na lage,


Jo doobna hai to itne sakoon se doobo,
Ke aas paas ki lehron ko bhi pata na lage,


Ho jis ada se mere sath bewafayi kar,
Ke tere baad mujhe koi bewafa na lage,


Woh phool jo mere daaman se ho geya mansoob,
Khuda kare usay bazaar ki hawa na lage,


Tum aankh muund ke pe jao zindagi qaiser,
Ke aik ghoont main shaayed yeh bd-maza na lage..

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Re: tere naam
« Reply #764 on: September 27, 2016, 06:48:07 AM »
Tumhare sheher ka mausam barra suhaana lage,
Main ik shaam chura loon agar bura na lage,


Tumhare bas main agar ho to bhool jao humen,
Tumhen bhulaane main shayed mujhe zamaana lage,


Hamare pyar se jalne lagi hai ik duniya,
Dua karo kisi dushman ki baduaa na lage,


Na jane kya hai us ki be-baak ankhon main,
Woh mu chupaa ke jaye bhi to bewafa na lage,


Jo doobna hai to itne sakoon se doobo,
Ke aas paas ki lehron ko bhi pata na lage,


Ho jis ada se mere sath bewafayi kar,
Ke tere baad mujhe koi bewafa na lage,


Woh phool jo mere daaman se ho geya mansoob,
Khuda kare usay bazaar ki hawa na lage,


Tum aankh muund ke pe jao zindagi qaiser,
Ke aik ghoont main shaayed yeh bd-maza na lage..






Exceptionally beautiful Ghazal !!! mazaa aa gaya padh ke

...
umar de ikk rupaye chon , bevajah atthanni chali gayi,

jis umrey suhey phull khirdey, o rutt mastaani chali gayi,

kar ke adiyaan bekaar diyaan, tu ki khateya main ki khatteya,

tera vi joban beet gaya , meri vi jawaani chali gayi.........
« Last Edit: September 27, 2016, 06:57:03 AM by ruubz »

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Re: tere naam
« Reply #765 on: September 27, 2016, 08:09:50 AM »




Exceptionally beautiful Ghazal !!! mazaa aa gaya padh ke

...
umar de ikk rupaye chon , bevajah atthanni chali gayi,

jis umrey suhey phull khirdey, o rutt mastaani chali gayi,

kar ke adiyaan bekaar diyaan, tu ki khateya main ki khatteya,

tera vi joban beet gaya , meri vi jawaani chali gayi.........
beautifull words :ok:

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Re: tere naam
« Reply #766 on: September 27, 2016, 08:40:42 AM »

Alfaz ke jhoote bandhan mein,

Eghraaz  ke jhoote pardon mein,

Har shaqs mohabbat karta hai,

Halaan ke mohabbat kuch bhi nahin,

Sab jhoote rishte naatey hain,

Sab dil rakhne ki batain hain,

Kab kon kisi ka hota hai,

Sab assli roop chupaate hain,

Ehsaas se khaali log yahaan,

Lafzon ke teer chalate hain,

Aik baar nazar main aa ke woh,

Phir saari umar rulaate hain,

Yeh ishq-o-mohabbat, mehr-o-wafa,

Sab rasmi rasmi baten hain,

Har shaqs khudi ki masti mein,

Buss apni khaatir jeeta hai.....


Eghraaz=Motives
shaqs=aadmi
Mehr-o-wafa=pyaar mohabbat

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Re: tere naam
« Reply #767 on: September 27, 2016, 10:05:20 AM »
Ik gall ta hai true words har shaqs khud ki masti vich jeeonda,, j duniya li jeeve ta pagal j apne li jeeve tavi paagal j koi apne li hi krda kush fer kende eh ta 2 number da pesa kamaunda,, dikhave jyada

Khud ki masti mein khoja eh ghalib
Bura na maan jo vaiz bura kahe
Aesa bhi koi hai ke sab acha kahe
(Ghalib baba Ji hehe)

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Re: tere naam
« Reply #768 on: September 27, 2016, 10:46:36 AM »

Alfaz ke jhoote bandhan mein,

Eghraaz  ke jhoote pardon mein,

Har shaqs mohabbat karta hai,

Halaan ke mohabbat kuch bhi nahin,

Sab jhoote rishte naatey hain,

Sab dil rakhne ki batain hain,

Kab kon kisi ka hota hai,

Sab assli roop chupaate hain,

Ehsaas se khaali log yahaan,

Lafzon ke teer chalate hain,

Aik baar nazar main aa ke woh,

Phir saari umar rulaate hain,

Yeh ishq-o-mohabbat, mehr-o-wafa,

Sab rasmi rasmi baten hain,

Har shaqs khudi ki masti mein,

Buss apni khaatir jeeta hai.....


Eghraaz=Motives
shaqs=aadmi
Mehr-o-wafa=pyaar mohabbat
great words ........ very nice .... vease eyh ghazal main pehla ase topic vich likh chukya .. buhat hi vedia words ne  :ok:

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Re: tere naam
« Reply #769 on: October 02, 2016, 02:32:55 AM »
Aur bazaar se kya le jaaun,
Pehli baarish ka maza le jaaun,

Kuch to saughaat duun ghar walon ko,
Raat ankhon main sajaa le jaaun,

Ghar main samaan to ho dilchaspi ka,
Haadsa koi uthaa le jaaun,

Ik diya dair se jaltaa hoga,
Saath thori si havaa le jaaun,

Roz kehta hai hawaa ka jhonka,
Aa tujhe duur urraa le jaaun,

Aaj phir mujh se kaha dariyaa ne,
Kya iraada hai bahaa le jaaun,

Ghar se jaata hon to kaam aayen ge,
Ek do ashk bachaa le jaaun,

Jaib main kuch to rahe ga alvi,
Laao tum sab ki duaa le jaaun..

« Last Edit: October 03, 2016, 12:19:01 AM by Gujjar no1 »

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Re: tere naam
« Reply #770 on: October 03, 2016, 02:09:05 PM »
very nice words great words  :clap:

...
Great Work *

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Re: tere naam
« Reply #771 on: October 03, 2016, 02:33:19 PM »
very nice words :clap:

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Great Work *
thanx bro ,ruubz and ladako ji

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Re: tere naam
« Reply #772 on: October 04, 2016, 12:53:11 AM »
Mujhy Na Sans Aati Hai,
Na Mera Dam Nikalta Hai..
Magar,
Yeh Beech Ka Aalam
Bohat Takleef Deta Hai..!!

Mujhy Ander Nigalta Hai
Na Sahil Per Patakta Hai
Bikharna Yun Samandar Ka
Bahut Takleef Deta Hai..!!

Jo Tum Bolo Bikhar Jaayein
Jo Tum Chaho Sanwar Jaayein
Magar Yun Totna Jurna
Bohat Takleeef Deta Hai…!!

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Re: tere naam
« Reply #773 on: October 04, 2016, 04:08:57 AM »
wah wah realy beautifulllll  :clap:
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Aithay kaiyan nu maan wafawaan da,
Tay kaiyan nu naaz adawaan da,

asi peelay patar darakhtaan day,
Sanu rehnda khof hawawaan da.‌

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Re: tere naam
« Reply #774 on: October 06, 2016, 12:00:11 PM »
saat sarroon ka yea behta darya teray naam,

har sur may ik rang dhank ka teray naam,

jungle jungle roonay waalay sub moasam,

aur hawa ka sabaz dupatta teray naam,

hijar ki shaam akeli raat k khali dar,

subha-e-farak ka dard ujala teray naam,

jitnay khuwab khuda ny meray naam likhay,

in khawaboon ka rysha rysha teray naam…

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Re: tere naam
« Reply #775 on: October 06, 2016, 05:43:53 PM »
Apni  zindgi  ki har shaam tere naam kar doon,

Tere he akhoon ka jaam tere naam kar doon,

"RISKY" doob jaye teri jheel se akhoon main,

Fir  apni he barbadi  ka iljam tere naam kar doon.
  8->

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Re: tere naam
« Reply #776 on: October 06, 2016, 10:43:42 PM »
wah wah realy beautifulllll  :clap:
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Aithay kaiyan nu maan wafawaan da,
Tay kaiyan nu naaz adawaan da,

asi peelay patar darakhtaan day,
Sanu rehnda khof hawawaan da.‌


beautiful !

...
Sabhi insan hain
magar
Faraq sirf itna hai

Kuch zakhm dete hain
Kuch zakhm bhartey hain

Humsafar

Bahut hain
Magar
Farq sirf itna hai

Kuch sath dete hain
Kuch chor dete hain

Pyar

Sabhi karte hain
Magar
Farq sirf itna hai

Kuch jaan dete hain
Kuch jaan lete hain

Dosti

Sabhi karte hain
Magar
Farq sirf itna hai

Kuch log nibhatay hain
Kuch log aazmatey hain.....

« Last Edit: October 06, 2016, 10:58:45 PM by ruubz »

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Re: tere naam
« Reply #777 on: October 07, 2016, 04:02:24 AM »
Baat phoolon ki suna karte they,
Hum kabhi sher kaha karte they,


Mish-alen le ke tumhare gham ki,
Hum andheron me chala karte they,


Ab kahan aisi tabiyat vaale,
Chott khaa kar jo jua karte they,


Tark -e- ehsaas-e-mohabbat mushkil,
Haan magar ehl-e-wafaa karte they,


Bikhri bikhri hui zulfon vaale,
Qaafile rok liya karte they,


Aaj gulshan me shagufay “saghar”,
Shikva e baad-e-sabaa karte they..


...
Sabhi insan hain
magar
Faraq sirf itna hai

Kuch zakhm dete hain
Kuch zakhm bhartey hain

Humsafar

Bahut hain
Magar
Farq sirf itna hai

Kuch sath dete hain
Kuch chor dete hain

Pyar

Sabhi karte hain
Magar
Farq sirf itna hai

Kuch jaan dete hain
Kuch jaan lete hain

Dosti

Sabhi karte hain
Magar
Farq sirf itna hai

Kuch log nibhatay hain
Kuch log aazmatey hain.....


very nice words like this :ok:

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Re: tere naam
« Reply #778 on: October 09, 2016, 10:04:09 AM »

Palko ko kabhi hamne bhigoya hi nahi,
Wo sochte hai kr hum kabhi roye hi nahi,
Wo puchte hai ki khwabo me kise dekhte ho,
Aur hum hai ki unki yado me soye hi nahi..!

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Re: tere naam
« Reply #779 on: October 12, 2016, 07:33:50 AM »
KAHIN MILAY TU USAY YEH KEHNA,

FASEEL-E-NAFRAT GIRA RAHI HOON

GUZRAY DINO KO BULA RAHI HOON,

WO APNAY WADAY SE PHIR GAYA HA,

MAIN APNAY WADAY NIBHAA RAHI HOON,

 

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