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...................Intzaar........................
« on: September 06, 2008, 04:34:06 PM »
Intzar menu us ghari da see jis ghari mein apne har rishate toan door ho giya...
galti meri seee...
jo mein sab nu bhul kithe kho giya...
hadse(incident) zindgi ch har kise nal hunde ne...
par eh hadsa kuch ajeeb see...
mein shyad har kise toan door ho giya...
oh har pal meri zindgi da intzar ban ke reh giyaaa...
zado mein kise nal wada kar apni jindgi nu kisi hor di zindgi nal zorda reh giyaaa...
bhul giya wade kise naal te mein kise da ho giyaaa....
galati meri see...
jo mein sab nu bhul kithe kho giyaaa....
sache pyar di kadar na kar ohadaaa aitbar appto kho liyaa...
saja tan milani seee...
ohada intzaar meri maut ban ke reh giyaa...
ohada intzaar meri matu ban ke reh giya.....
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...................Intzaar........................
« on: September 06, 2008, 04:34:06 PM »

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Re: ...................Intzaar........................
« Reply #1 on: September 06, 2008, 04:37:06 PM »
jas bohat sohna likhiyaa ............

Intzar menu us ghari da see jis ghari mein apne har rishate toan door ho giya...
galti meri seee...
jo mein sab nu bhul kithe kho giya...

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Re: ...................Intzaar........................
« Reply #2 on: September 06, 2008, 04:39:41 PM »
I AM SPEACHLESS VERY VERY NICE BOUT WADIYA
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Re: ...................Intzaar........................
« Reply #3 on: September 06, 2008, 04:44:59 PM »
bai Jas buhat buhat nice.... really nice lihiya tu yaar ...... as Nadeem said... it's really speechless work.
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Re: ...................Intzaar........................
« Reply #4 on: September 06, 2008, 04:46:00 PM »
Bahut wadia 22 g badi sachi gal kiti...

Kee dasan gal os kudi di nhi jihda sath nibha sakiya...
Yaadgar jahi banke rah gayi na kho sakiya na pa sakiya...
Bahut jaldi tuhade sab layi eh poem laike hazar howanga. Jo kise di real story aa.
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Re: ...................Intzaar........................
« Reply #5 on: September 06, 2008, 05:27:51 PM »
thanks preet, nadeem, aman te tezy 22.
tezy 22 jaldi pa aSSI WAIT KARA GE YAARR
BOHAT GHAINT LAGGDI A POEM EHNA LINES TOH PAR K TA
Kee dasan gal os kudi di nhi jihda sath nibha sakiya...
Yaadgar jahi banke rah gayi na kho sakiya na pa sakiya...
BOHAT ZABARDAST LINES LIKHIA NEH VASE
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Re: ...................Intzaar........................
« Reply #6 on: September 06, 2008, 06:18:33 PM »
Bas 22 g jayada wait nhi karni paini tuhanu bas 1-2 din.
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Re: ...................Intzaar........................
« Reply #7 on: September 08, 2008, 09:31:41 PM »
o achaa yaar mein dass dewio zarror jado v post kitti ok veere
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Re: ...................Intzaar........................
« Reply #8 on: September 09, 2008, 08:02:46 AM »
o wow hai ni a ta o c a shear wow jus bohut hi wadiya likhea kamaal karti heeh i liked dat last line hehe and ik kamm karo koi name dasdo k asi tuhade shear de neeche naam laike comment kar sakiye a inni lambi id likhni paindi haye ni a ta o c nahi te main pa dena naam DARPOK coz haye ni a ta o c idha lagda jawie dareya hunda dil hahahaha and tezy tusi jaldi jaldi o shear post karo hun main padnaaaa m xiteddd to read it hehe and ajj do din hoge lolz
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Re: ...................Intzaar........................
« Reply #9 on: September 09, 2008, 08:53:45 PM »
laye galboo yaar mera naa mera naa dil hi tor ta break:)
10 wari meri profile te ghera la ayi te mera naam nahi pata laggia ajje tak jk
chal koi naa huuhaaaaa
mera naam "jasmeet" a people usually know me with "jas"
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Re: ...................Intzaar........................
« Reply #10 on: September 09, 2008, 11:23:39 PM »
Jas 22 g and punjaban g main oh poem post karti tusi pad sakde aa. Sorry late is karke ho gayi main sochda c poem wadi aa cell te type karna hard aa ghar jake computer te type karunga. Par fer cell te e karti.
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Re: ...................Intzaar........................
« Reply #11 on: September 10, 2008, 11:16:39 AM »
bahut shona likhya sachi dear ji sach h ja serf peom hi h laga te ahwe reha ki tuhade naal sach much ahwe huya ha ji..bahut shona likhya mai te roh hi peni bcz i like dard and sad shyari ji likhde reho ahwe hi te jawanyia manao ji
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Re: ...................Intzaar........................
« Reply #12 on: September 10, 2008, 08:02:02 PM »
bas ji jo kujh marzi samajj lawo
thanks yaar  like kitta tusi
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