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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #2300 on: October 28, 2012, 10:24:23 AM »
saleeka hi nahi shayad use mehsoos karne ka
jo kehta hai khuda hai to nazar aana jaroori hai ...

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #2300 on: October 28, 2012, 10:24:23 AM »

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #2301 on: October 28, 2012, 10:47:30 AM »
Muntazir hai aj bhi uska koi usko ja kar keh de..
Sooya nahi karte yaad main jalne waale...

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #2302 on: October 28, 2012, 11:01:22 AM »
qainaat na intezaar mein neend aaye umar bhar
aane ka ahed kar gaye aaye jo khawab mein...

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #2303 on: October 28, 2012, 11:27:43 AM »
Jal raha hai koi hijar ki aag main..

Beparwaay ka ye alam hai usko koi ranjhish hi nahi

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #2304 on: October 28, 2012, 12:03:48 PM »
aise hijar ke mausam kab kab aate hai
tere ilawa yaad humein sab aate hai...

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #2305 on: October 28, 2012, 11:47:59 PM »
Suna hai phir Eid aa gey hai..
 
Suno, tum chale ao toh hum bhi yaqeen kar len..

Toh aana Hi Pdaa tumhe Hmari Mehfil Me
Na Jane Abb Konsa Tufaan Saath laye Ho

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #2306 on: October 29, 2012, 01:42:36 AM »
Nazron ne Nazron main Nazron se Kaha!!!!
Nazrein na mila, Nazron ke kasam Nazron se nazar lag jae ge


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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #2307 on: October 29, 2012, 05:04:42 AM »

woh bhi kya manzir hota hai bheegi bheegi aankho ka
dheere dheere jab milti hai meri aur tumhari aankhein...
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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #2308 on: October 29, 2012, 06:43:10 AM »
Yeh shararat bhara lehjaa to meri aadat hai,
Tu har ik baat pe yun nam na kiya kar aankhain.

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #2309 on: October 29, 2012, 06:57:54 AM »
eye wali dp laga phir likhunga aaj
maine eye wali ghazal suni hai
:D: :D: :D:

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #2310 on: October 29, 2012, 07:14:16 AM »
Phoolon ki numayesh main agar hum  hua to,
Ik baar to gulaabon ko barri aag lage gi..

:D::D::D:

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #2311 on: October 29, 2012, 07:17:34 AM »
e jara pad te liya ker paste kern taun pehle
didn't find ny meaning in ur sher :(

tum bin bada udaas raha chaudavi ka chaand
chhat par nikal k doob gaya chaudavi ka chaand...

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #2312 on: October 29, 2012, 07:29:52 AM »
Actually it was like

Phoolon ki numayesh main agar woh bhi hua to,
Ik baar to gulaabon ko barri aag lage gi..



But ena sohna sher tainu dedicate karan laye rooh nhi kitti
so i wrote hum rather then woh bhi

 :D: :D: :D: :D: :D:

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #2313 on: October 29, 2012, 07:35:11 AM »
nakal karn layi v akal chahidi hundi :D: :D: :D:
dont replace d words :hehe:
je nahi rooh kardi c fer na likhdi baanh te fadi ni c
:cool: :cool: :cool:

saat hi sur hai sargam mein aathvan sur mere saajan ka
sabse achha sabse anokha nagma dil ki dhadkan ka...

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #2314 on: October 29, 2012, 08:25:36 AM »
Meri marji jive marji likiha
tainu jini k akal aa ppatta sanu
Fukra


Ishq Kernai Walon Ka Yehi Anjam Hota Hai
Kabhi shardi Kabhi Khansi Kabhi Zukaam Hota Hai


aah leh tere level di shayri  :D: :D: :D: :D: :D:

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #2315 on: October 29, 2012, 08:31:15 AM »
Faqeer kyun tujhe marne ki bad-dua dega,

 Tera gharoor hi kar jayega tabaah tujhe ..

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #2316 on: October 29, 2012, 08:33:52 AM »
Meri marji jive marji likiha
tainu jini k akal aa ppatta sanu
Fukra


Ishq Kernai Walon Ka Yehi Anjam Hota Hai
Kabhi shardi Kabhi Khansi Kabhi Zukaam Hota Hai


aah leh tere level di shayri  :D: :D: :D: :D: :D:
bandri jehi
:D: :D: :D:

thodi mature hoja shayari ch fer aayin okay
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Gujar ise raaz-e-mohabbat kya samjhayein
iske khelne khane k din hai...
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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #2317 on: October 29, 2012, 08:43:14 AM »
Faqeer kyun tujhe marne ki bad-dua dega,

 Tera gharoor hi kar jayega tabaah tujhe ..

tusi mere vich kera gharoor dekh liya gujar ji
tuhanu yeh nhi dekhda kive bolida :sad:

tusi hi karo shayari
app nhi aunde kade hun yeh topic vich
Khuda Aafis!!

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #2318 on: October 29, 2012, 08:58:46 AM »
jo chaha tha bo mila kisi aur ko,,,
khuda se pucha kya mera gunaah
jo essi sazza di rabb ne muje yaar
fir v koi gam nahi es karam par
kyeo ke je mrea dharm tha,,,je mera dharm tha ,,,,,dosanjhdeep

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #2319 on: October 29, 2012, 09:33:46 AM »
tusi mere vich kera gharoor dekh liya gujar ji
tuhanu yeh nhi dekhda kive bolida :sad:

tusi hi karo shayari
app nhi aunde kade hun yeh topic vich
Khuda Aafis!!
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main just poatry keti
aa tuhade layi aa just  :smile:
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