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Author Topic: Do fulke de mainu khaan lyi sardaara . . . .(sad nd true incident) . . Joban hundal  (Read 1269 times)

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Tere kol aaya ajj mai lai ke aas bdi
kaddi bhukh ne jaan te lagi pyaas bdi
ik budhi umar hai
duja gareebi ne maariaan ne maara
Do fulke de mainu khaan lyi sardaara

tere baap daade de pashua nu pathe mai paunda c
jawani vele mai hathi mehnat kar roji roti kmaunda c
hun budhaape ch vatta khod k karda ha mai guzaara
Do fulke de mainu khaan lyi sardaara

putar mere umar ch wade ne bade tere nalo
ghar vsaa k apne ohna rishta torh lia mere nalo
apni sass nu v kad ditta gharo
meriaan nuhaa ne maar fitkaara
Do fulke de mainu khaan lyi sardaara

ik fulka mai khaa lau ik de devanga apni rani nu
ro ro ke akha cho dikhna band ho gya marjaani nu
budhi umar ch asi ajj v ha ik duje da sahaara
Do fulke de mainu khaan lyi sardaara

aaya budhapa te dangori sahaare chalna sikha gya
mangan nalo kehnde marya changa fir v mai mangan aa gya
na band kari darvaja
na kar maitho tu hun kinaara
Do fulke de mainu khaan lyi sardaara

de ke gareeb nu roti joban tu duaava sachiaa paavenga
rajj k kar parhayi tu afsar wada ban jaavenga
gareeb bande di sewa karni na shaddi kade tainu khushiaan milangiaa hazaara
Do fulke de mainu khaan lyi sardaara



this is true incident happend wid me last week . . . . . . A poor old man came to me nd asked  for 2 fulka (chapaati or roti) . And baaki jo kuj galbaat meri usde naal hoyi oh mai uppar poem de roop ch likheya hai
i hope tuhanu meri baki di poems vaangu eh v pasand avegi
please apne valuable coments shadna na bhulyo . . . . . . Thanks g vry much

tuhada apna
joban hundal

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hayeeee :sad: :sad:
india ja ke jado eh sabh dekhna penda tan hanju hi nikalde ne akhan chon...i luv mah punjab buh jado eh sabh uthe vekhna penda tan murr ek jan nu dil ni karda :sad: :sad: :sad:

n i would rahter give mah meal to the 1 who needs it n app pukhe reh lena..

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hayeeee :sad: :sad:
india ja ke jado eh sabh dekhna penda tan hanju hi nikalde ne akhan chon...i luv mah punjab buh jado eh sabh uthe vekhna penda tan murr ek jan nu dil ni karda :sad: :sad: :sad:

n i would rahter give mah meal to the 1 who needs it n app pukhe reh lena..
yeaah tusi theek kehnde ho........... but apne ethe lok jaan bujh ke bikhaaari bahut bande wa.......changge bhale hunde wa te mehnat karn di bjaaaye bheekh mangde wa........but we shud help them who really need our help.......mere dad kehnde ne jo paise mangda hai usnu kuj nahi denaa chahida te jo roti mangda hai usdi help karni chaahidi hai bcoz bukhe bande nu sach vich sadi lorh hai....

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hanji sahi keha ke we should help them who needs us..buh jado koye vi mohre ayonda eh..tan dil bas karda de devo.. i know itz bad..even mah bro says the same thing..he asked this guy if he wanna work.. n he was keep asking for money.. mah bro said ..ok here is thing.. i will give ya shelter n clothes n everything.. how about if u come with me n work for me .. guess wah the guy did.. he ran away from him.. i was abt to give him the money buh bro said it arn't rite

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bilkul sahi kitaa tuhaade bro ne ....................... guru nanak sahab ne kihaa hai ke hathi kirat karo te naam japo.........
people shud follow it.....................   jis bande to inspire ho ke mai eh poem likhi hai oh vichaara binaa kise kahe sade ghar de bahr jo tree ne ohnaa di safaayi karda hai........asi usnu kehnde ha ke tu bada weak hai tenu kamm karn di lorh nae but still he does nd i nsists to do so .....bcoz oh kehndaa ke mangan naalo marnaa changa ....... oh kehnda roun to bgair ta maa v bache nu dudh nae pilaaundi is karke oh kamm karda hai.................. 
aise jazbe waleaa nu mera salaam g

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bilkul sahi kitaa tuhaade bro ne ....................... guru nanak sahab ne kihaa hai ke hathi kirat karo te naam japo.........
people shud follow it.....................   jis bande to inspire ho ke mai eh poem likhi hai oh vichaara binaa kise kahe sade ghar de bahr jo tree ne ohnaa di safaayi karda hai........asi usnu kehnde ha ke tu bada weak hai tenu kamm karn di lorh nae but still he does nd i nsists to do so .....bcoz oh kehndaa ke mangan naalo marnaa changa ....... oh kehnda roun to bgair ta maa v bache nu dudh nae pilaaundi is karke oh kamm karda hai.................. 
aise jazbe waleaa nu mera salaam g
kamjor hove ja na hove.. bas himmat na shado n kam karde raho..m proud of that guy jinna ke tuahnu keha ke ohna still kam karna eh.. sade va;o vi ohna nu salam ji hats offto him

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bahut vadia likya 22  =D> =D> =D>

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Thanks g very much aap sab da mainu ena like karn lyi

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really so nice  =D> =D>

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boht sohni poem aa veere......kamaal e krta  =D>

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thanks very much  ronak g and lion saab

 

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