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Chal ve sajana uthe chaliye...........
« on: February 10, 2011, 05:30:16 PM »
Chal ve sajana uthe chaliye...........
Jithe nachdi hove sade pyar di bahar,,,,,,,,
Ambar sade lye satrangi peengh paan,,,,,,,,
Te hawa vich gholia hove tere ishq ka khumar....
Chal ve sajana uthe chaliye...........
Jithe nachadi hove bahar........
Na rook took kise gal vich hove....
Na ghoriya nzara da hathayar.......
Chal ve sajana uthe chaliye...........
Jithe nachdi hove bahar,,,,,,
Sanu nahi chahide mahal murare.....
Na hi labia cara de uphaar,,,,,
Seedi saadi zindagi hove,,,,
Bus hove ik duje liye satkaar,,,,,,,,
Chal ve sajana uthe chaliye...........
Jithe nachdi hove bahaar,,,,,,,,,,,
Passé dhale te kahanu maan karde.....
Nal kise de kuj na jaana na ae motia de haar.......
Chal ve sajana uthe chaliye...........
Jithe nachi hove hahaar...........
Puchke appne dil to kari fasila.....
Na zabardasti da hove ikraar,,,,,,,,
Chal ve sajana uthe chaliye...........
Jithe nachi hove Preet de par thalle bahaar........

 

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Chal ve sajana uthe chaliye...........
« on: February 10, 2011, 05:30:16 PM »

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Re: Chal ve sajana uthe chaliye...........
« Reply #1 on: February 10, 2011, 09:41:43 PM »
Nice aa ji.. =D>
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Re: Chal ve sajana uthe chaliye...........
« Reply #2 on: February 10, 2011, 10:09:48 PM »
Quote from: Kudrat K. Grewal on February 10, 2011, 09:41:43 PM
Nice aa ji.. =D>

thanks ji atleast kisi nu tah pasand ayea ji,,,,,,,,
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Re: Chal ve sajana uthe chaliye...........
« Reply #3 on: February 11, 2011, 03:11:45 AM »
hmmmm ik var fer correction da time a gya e ji :
Mahal murare nai ji 'mahal munare' hunda e
Nd tuc kavita likhan di koshish karde o k geet.
Je kavita likhde o ta main line likhn di lor ni koi is nal kavita da flow tut janda e. Te je geet likhde o ta fir hrek antre vich ghto ghat char lina zroor likho.
Jad likhna shuru karde o ta jo likhde o us khud parh k dekhya kro hrek line di lai apne to pehli line nal mildi e is nu sahi karan lai shabda vich fer badal kro.
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Re: Chal ve sajana uthe chaliye...........
« Reply #4 on: February 11, 2011, 11:03:24 AM »
BOHAT ZABRDAST BOHAT WADYA MAZA AGYA PAR K
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Re: Chal ve sajana uthe chaliye...........
« Reply #5 on: February 11, 2011, 11:14:25 AM »
Quote from: THE TOPIC STOPPER on February 11, 2011, 03:11:45 AM
hmmmm ik var fer correction da time a gya e ji :
Mahal murare nai ji 'mahal munare' hunda e
Nd tuc kavita likhan di koshish karde o k geet.
Je kavita likhde o ta main line likhn di lor ni koi is nal kavita da flow tut janda e. Te je geet likhde o ta fir hrek antre vich ghto ghat char lina zroor likho.
Jad likhna shuru karde o ta jo likhde o us khud parh k dekhya kro hrek line di lai apne to pehli line nal mildi e is nu sahi karan lai shabda vich fer badal kro.

thanks ji,,,,,,,,,,,tuhandi correction da so sweet ji,,,,,,i need these tips to improve myself ji,,,,,,thanks acha bacha ji,,,,,,,,too
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