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ਜਿਂਦਗਾਨੀਂ ਲਿਖ ਦਿੱਤੀ ......by JatTi
« on: July 30, 2008, 12:00:13 AM »
jidda phela hi dass chuki a inderjit singh ji bohat hi sohna likhde neh...likhde ki a bas akra( words)vich jaan pa dende neh..vasse mere walo rabb nu doa hai k inderjit di kalam nu din choni te raat dogni tarki dewa barkat dewe jo agge toh v sade likhee kujh edha di unique shyeri liy k awe... umeed hai ki a v likhia pasand karo gye...thanxxx
ਜਿਂਦਗਾਨੀਂ ਲਿਖ ਦਿੱਤੀ |

ਵਕਤ ਦੇ ਕੋਰੇ ਵਰਕੇ ਤੇ,
ਅਧੂਰੀ ਕਹਾਣੀ ਲਿਖ ਦਿੱਤੀ,
ਜੋੜ ਹਰਫ਼ ਦਰਦਾਂ ਦੇ ਅਂਤ,
ਨਿਮਾਣੀ , ਜਿਂਦਗਾਨੀਂ ਲਿਖ ਦਿੱਤੀ |

ਲੈ ਦਵਾਤ ਕਾਲੀ, ਇਂਤਜ਼ਾਰ ਦੀ,
ਘੜ ਕਲ਼ਮ ,ਝੂਠੇ ਪਿਆਰ ਦੀ,
ਗੈਰ ਬਣੇ ਆਪਣਿਆਂ ਦੀ ਦਿੱਤੀ,
ਤਣਹਾਈ ,ਨਿਸ਼ਾਨੀ ਲਿਖ ਦਿੱਤੀ |
ਜੋੜ ਹਰਫ਼, ਦਰਦਾਂ ਦੇ ਅਂਤ,
ਨਿਮਾਣੀ ,ਜਿਂਦਗਾਨੀਂ ਲਿਖ ਦਿੱਤੀ |

ਮਿਣ ਗਹਿਰਾਈ, ਪੱਥਰ ਅੱਖੀਆਂ ਦੀ,
ਸ਼ੋਦਾਈ ਦਿਲ ਦੀਆਂ, ਸਖੀਆਂ ਦੀ,
ਲੈ ਹਂਝੂਆਂ ਦੀ ਤੜਫ਼ ਸਾਰੀ,
ਫਿਰ ਆਪਣੀ ਜ਼ੁਬਾਨੀ ਲਿਖ ਦਿੱਤੀ |
ਜੋੜ ਹਰਫ਼ ਦਰਦਾਂ ਦੇ ਅਂਤ,
ਨਿਮਾਣੀ ਜਿਂਦਗਾਨੀਂ ਲਿਖ ਦਿੱਤੀ |

ਟੁਟੈ ਤੇ ਤੋੜੇ ਰਿਸ਼ਤੀਆਂ ਦੀ,
ਅਨਮੰਨੇ ਜੋੜੇ ਰਿਸ਼ਤੀਆਂ ਦੀ,
ਸਾਡੇ ਨਾਲ ਬੀਤੀ ਨਸੀਬਾਂ ਦੀ,
ਅੱਜ਼ ਮਨਮਾਨੀ ਲਿਖ ਦਿੱਤੀ |
ਜੋੜ ਹਰਫ਼ ਦਰਦਾਂ ਦੇ ਅਂਤ,
ਨਿਮਾਣੀ ਜਿਂਦਗਾਨੀਂ ਲਿਖ ਦਿੱਤੀ
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ਜਿਂਦਗਾਨੀਂ ਲਿਖ ਦਿੱਤੀ ......by JatTi
« on: July 30, 2008, 12:00:13 AM »

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Re: ਜਿਂਦਗਾਨੀਂ ਲਿਖ ਦਿੱਤੀ ......by JatTi
« Reply #1 on: July 30, 2008, 01:40:30 PM »
ohh balle balle navi kiyaa baat hai tu ta buhat sohna paste kitta....... Proud of it.. always tu ohh rondi rondi shayari jahi likhdi rahndi c ajj koi changa likhiya really like it.....
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Re: ਜਿਂਦਗਾਨੀਂ ਲਿਖ ਦਿੱਤੀ ......by JatTi
« Reply #2 on: July 31, 2008, 02:07:27 AM »
jat ge ke matlab ......paste kitta... Laugh;) Laugh;) Laugh;)
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Re: ਜਿਂਦਗਾਨੀਂ ਲਿਖ ਦਿੱਤੀ ......by JatTi
« Reply #3 on: January 26, 2011, 11:23:44 PM »
first time in ma life i read a romantic punjabi potery nahi te sare rohnde hi rahende ne
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