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ਜਸਮੀਤ ਦੀ ਚਿੜੀ
« on: September 02, 2008, 09:26:15 PM »
phela sab nu mere walo sat sri akal ji
sorry aman veere te kudi canada di, sorry yaar tuadhnu kafi wait karni payi meri a poem liyi,sorry mein type karn vich thora lazy c is kar k time lagg gayia lao ji hun hajar a mere kujh apne armaan.
rahi gal please yaar kar koi meri kami Zarror dass k jaeo becauz apna kujh alag nawa kujh likhen di try mari a, apni keemat vichar zarror chad k jaeo mittro.sukhria


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Re: ਜਸਮੀਤ ਦੀ ਚਿੜੀ
« Reply #1 on: September 02, 2008, 11:04:46 PM »
SAT SRI AKAAL JAS.....BOHAT EE SOHNA LIKHIYAA & SORRI WALI KOI GAL NE YR....PAR TUSI EH NAI LIKHIYA KI HUN JAS DI LIFE KIDDA OH CHIRRII DE JAANNNN TON BAADDD??????????EH TUADI REAL STORY AA???UMMMMMMMMMMM TOO MANY QUESTION'S.....HAHAHAHHAHAHA.....ANYWAYZZ.... GUD JOB ..........SAD AA TUADI STORYY  sad;> sad;>
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Re: ਜਸਮੀਤ ਦੀ ਚਿੜੀ
« Reply #2 on: September 02, 2008, 11:14:37 PM »
hanji bahut vadiya likheya yaar,
par tusi ess kavita nu hor lambi kar sakde aa.... koshish karke dekheyo je koi gal bani tan jaroor post kareyo
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Re: ਜਸਮੀਤ ਦੀ ਚਿੜੀ
« Reply #3 on: September 03, 2008, 12:02:25 AM »
Ohh Balle Balle bai tu ta fateehh chakk ditta... Buhat nice likhi.....& apna GS bai di gal theek aa tu ahh Kavita nu hoor lambi kar sakde yaar... Try karke vakhi........

Gud Job bai..... :-bd :-bd
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Re: ਜਸਮੀਤ ਦੀ ਚਿੜੀ
« Reply #4 on: September 03, 2008, 07:32:01 PM »
bas time hani yaar lambiu karn ta ..vase jadi v mille ga zarror try maro
and thanks sab da tuahnu pasand ayi
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Re: ਜਸਮੀਤ ਦੀ ਚਿੜੀ
« Reply #5 on: September 03, 2008, 10:14:38 PM »
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