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AAG KA DARYA HAI OR DOOB KR JANA HAI!
« on: October 22, 2011, 12:51:25 PM »
masoom mhbbat ka bs itna sa fasana hai
kaghaz ki haweli hai barish ka zamana hai

kia shart-e mhbbt hai,kia shart-e zamana hai
awaz b zakhmi hai or geet b gana hai

us par utarny ki umeed bht km hai
kashti b purani hai,tufaan ko b ana hai

samjhy ya na samjhy,andaz mhbbt ka
ik shakhs ko aankhon se ek shair sunana hai

bholi c ada koi phr ishq ki zid pr hai
phr aag ka dreya hei doob  k jana hei



copy paste by:  Nvikram   :hehe:
« Last Edit: October 22, 2011, 01:35:02 PM by мαтєяιαℓιѕтι¢ »
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Re: AAG KA DARYA HAI OR DOOB KR JANA HAI!
« Reply #1 on: October 22, 2011, 12:55:09 PM »
wah ji wah kya baat hai ,very nice !
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Re: AAG KA DARYA HAI OR DOOB KR JANA HAI!
« Reply #2 on: October 22, 2011, 01:32:42 PM »
so nice poatry bro
mera diil karda tere hath chum la
tu kidda eni shoni poatry kar lai? :okk: :okk: :okk: :okk: :okk: :okk: :okk: :okk: :okk: :okk: :okk: :okk:
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Re: AAG KA DARYA HAI OR DOOB KR JANA HAI!
« Reply #3 on: October 22, 2011, 01:36:04 PM »
Quote from: ashfaq_gujr on October 22, 2011, 01:32:42 PM
so nice poatry bro
mera diil karda tere hath chum la
tu kidda eni shoni poatry kar lai? :okk: :okk: :okk: :okk: :okk: :okk: :okk: :okk: :okk: :okk: :okk: :okk:


mein  ni  kiti bai ehe poetry  dheyan naal dekh




n thanks  dilraj :)
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Re: AAG KA DARYA HAI OR DOOB KR JANA HAI!
« Reply #4 on: October 22, 2011, 01:43:29 PM »
Quote from: мαтєяιαℓιѕтι¢ on October 22, 2011, 12:51:25 PM
masoom mhbbat ka bs itna sa fasana hai
kaghaz ki haweli hai barish ka zamana hai

kia shart-e mhbbt hai,kia shart-e zamana hai
awaz b zakhmi hai or geet b gana hai

us par utarny ki umeed bht km hai
kashti b purani hai,tufaan ko b ana hai

samjhy ya na samjhy,andaz mhbbt ka
ik shakhs ko aankhon se ek shair sunana hai

bholi c ada koi phr ishq ki zid pr hai
phr aag ka dreya hei doob  k jana hei



copy paste by:  Nvikram   :hehe:

Zakhm pe zakhm
khaa ke ji
apne lahoo ke ghoont pee
aah! na kar
labon ko see
yeh ishq nahin
Dillaggee
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Re: AAG KA DARYA HAI OR DOOB KR JANA HAI!
« Reply #5 on: October 22, 2011, 01:46:07 PM »
Quote from: Arz Sra on October 22, 2011, 01:43:29 PM
Zakhm pe zakhm
khaa ke ji
apne lahoo ke ghoont pee
aah! na kar
labon ko see
yeh ishq nahin
Dillaggee




nice    aa baai ji  i think sadiq  aa ehde  writer  i have listned   tht qwalli

awesome  !
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Re: AAG KA DARYA HAI OR DOOB KR JANA HAI!
« Reply #6 on: October 22, 2011, 01:49:12 PM »
rothne our manane ka shok usee bi thaa

muhbat main azmane ka shok usee bi thaa

kuch ham bi qadar shnas thee buhat
kuch hath badhane ka shok usee bi thaa

rindoun main mashor kuch ham bi kam na thee

or kuch peene pilane ka shok usee bi thaa

mujee tu adit thi rasta badal ke chlne ki ashfaq

lakin nay safar ko jane ka shok usee bi thaa

...
ey 22 copy past nai meri apni poatry ea :happy:
« Last Edit: October 22, 2011, 01:58:01 PM by ashfaq_gujr »
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Re: AAG KA DARYA HAI OR DOOB KR JANA HAI!
« Reply #7 on: October 22, 2011, 08:37:42 PM »
Quote from: ashfaq_gujr on October 22, 2011, 01:49:12 PM
rothne our manane ka shok usee bi thaa

muhbat main azmane ka shok usee bi thaa

kuch ham bi qadar shnas thee buhat
kuch hath badhane ka shok usee bi thaa

rindoun main mashor kuch ham bi kam na thee

or kuch peene pilane ka shok usee bi thaa

mujee tu adit thi rasta badal ke chlne ki ashfaq

lakin nay safar ko jane ka shok usee bi thaa

...
ey 22 copy past nai meri apni poatry ea :happy:




nice   aa baai  5 number dite tenu ehde lai  :okk:
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Re: AAG KA DARYA HAI OR DOOB KR JANA HAI!
« Reply #8 on: October 23, 2011, 12:23:19 AM »
nice aa
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