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Duniya Da Mela
« on: December 16, 2012, 09:25:19 AM »

Ek vaar Chota jeha Bacha apne Gareeb jehe
Daddy nal Mela dekhn gea.. Mele vich
bacha har ek cheej Laina choundha c.. Ohs
Bache ne apne Daddy nu keha,''daddy,. Oh
dekho kini Sohni car hai, menu oh lai
deo'' ohde daddy kol paise nahi c.. Fir v oh
bche di ungil Farh k turi gea.. Bache ne hor
v bahut kuj manghea.. Par Ohde Daddy ne
ohnu kuj v na lai k dita... Bche nu apne peo
te bahut Gussa c..

Suddenly, bache di ungil shut gai.. Bacha
Gawaach Gea.., oh ek dukaan laghe khra
ho k Ron lag pea.., ek aadmi ne ohnu chup
kroun lai Toys lai k dite.. Par oh bache ne
keha ki menu sirf apna daddy chaidha hai..

Dekh lwo kina fark hai.. Pheln ohi bacha
Har toy lai laina choundha c te apne daddy
te Gussa kar reha c.. Par Baad ch ohi
munda kuj v nahi laina choundha c.. Sirf
apne Daddy nu labh reha c..

Is Story da asli moral eh hai ki Asi Saare
insaan.. Apne daddy matlb ki Rab di ungil
farh k eh dunia da mela dekhn aaye haan..
Sanu ajey apne Daddy (Rab) di kadar nahi..
Sada dhyaan ajey sirf dunia dia Cheeja te
hai., pta te ohs Din laghna jis Din Rab ne
ungil Shad diti.. Fir sanu v dunia di Koi
cheej ni chnghi lgni te asi sirf apne peo..
Apne Rab nu labhna...
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« Last Edit: April 24, 2014, 11:58:35 AM by °◆SáŅj◆° »
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Duniya Da Mela
« on: December 16, 2012, 09:25:19 AM »

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Re: Duniya Da Mela
« Reply #1 on: December 16, 2012, 09:28:08 AM »
.  :okk: :okk: :sad:
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Re: Duniya Da Mela
« Reply #2 on: December 16, 2012, 09:29:27 AM »
dnn b sad,,
jss learn frm it :happy:
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Re: Duniya Da Mela
« Reply #3 on: December 16, 2012, 09:53:13 AM »
Thanks for sharing !!
and is VERY true !!
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Re: Duniya Da Mela
« Reply #4 on: December 16, 2012, 09:58:14 AM »
Balle veer

Bht vadiya sahi keha

Lakh hon gaddian car
Jehda sukh babe de charna c oh kite nae

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Re: Duniya Da Mela
« Reply #5 on: December 16, 2012, 09:59:42 AM »
thnxxxxxx mittro.. wakya e bht sedh dindi a eh story
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Re: Duniya Da Mela
« Reply #6 on: December 16, 2012, 10:16:41 AM »
nice.
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Re: Duniya Da Mela
« Reply #7 on: December 16, 2012, 10:24:06 AM »
thnxxxxx
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Re: Duniya Da Mela
« Reply #8 on: December 16, 2012, 09:20:53 PM »
Realy heart touching.
Sohni a story. :okk:
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Re: Duniya Da Mela
« Reply #9 on: December 16, 2012, 09:47:53 PM »
Thnxxxxxxxxx sbh da
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Re: Duniya Da Mela
« Reply #10 on: December 16, 2012, 10:38:18 PM »
sweet but tough moral of the story..nyce!
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Re: Duniya Da Mela
« Reply #11 on: January 04, 2013, 02:31:13 PM »
nyc bai
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Re: Duniya Da Mela
« Reply #12 on: January 04, 2013, 04:49:12 PM »
Awesome  :okk:
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Re: Duniya Da Mela
« Reply #13 on: January 04, 2013, 05:00:01 PM »
Quote from: Sαη∂нυ™..╰»(๏̯͡๏) cya 07jan on December 16, 2012, 09:25:19 AM
Ek vaar Chota jeha Bacha apne Gareeb jehe
Daddy nal Mela dekhn gea.. Mele vich
bacha har ek cheej Laina choundha c.. Ohs
Bache ne apne Daddy nu keha,''daddy,. Oh
dekho kini Sohni car hai, menu oh lai
deo''ohde daddy kol paise nahi c.. Fir v oh
bche di ungil Farh k turi gea.. Bache ne hor
v bahut kuj manghea.. Par Ohde Daddy ne
ohnu kuj v na lai k dita... Bche nu apne peo
te bahut Gussa c..
Suddenly, bache di ungil shut gai.. Bacha
Gawaach Gea.., oh ek dukaan laghe khra
ho k Ron lag pea.., ek aadmi ne ohnu chup
kroun lai Toys lai k dite.. Par oh bache ne
keha ki menu sirf apna daddy chaidha hai..
Dekh lwo kina fark hai.. Pheln ohi bacha
Har toy lai laina choundha c te apne daddy
te Gussa kar reha c.. Par Baad ch ohi
munda kuj v nahi laina choundha c.. Sirf
apne Daddy nu labh reha c..
Is Story da asli theme eh hai ki Asi Saare
insaan.. Apne daddy matlb ki Rab di ungil
farh k eh dunia da mela dekhn aaye haan..
Sanu ajey apne Daddy (Rab) di kadar nahi..
Sada dhyaan ajey sirf dunia dia Cheeja te
hai., pta te ohs Din laghna jis Din Rab ne
ungil Shad diti.. Fir sanu v dunia di Koi
cheej ni chnghi lgni te asi sirf apne peo..
Apne Rab nu labhna...

:okk: :okk: :okk: :okk: :okk: :okk: :okk: :okk: :okk:

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oh my god ...eh story aa... 

"The Lost Child"
English story aa...ehnu punjabi ch bnaa te ditta author da name mention tan krna c :angr:

Khushwant singh di short story aa.. mainu 8th grade ch hundi c 8->

oh v din c... 8-> purania yaadan.... :love: school diyan :love: :blink:
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Re: Duniya Da Mela
« Reply #14 on: January 04, 2013, 08:20:07 PM »
nice way to teach  par menu mere dad di bhut kadar aa
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Re: Duniya Da Mela
« Reply #15 on: January 05, 2013, 12:34:42 AM »
 8-> 8-> 8-> 8-> 8-> 8-> 8-> .....
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Re: Duniya Da Mela
« Reply #16 on: January 05, 2013, 12:42:50 AM »
:sad: bouat sehi likhia
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Re: Duniya Da Mela
« Reply #17 on: January 05, 2013, 12:48:27 AM »
awsmmmmm lines ji
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Re: Duniya Da Mela
« Reply #18 on: January 07, 2013, 01:21:33 PM »
very nice story veer ji
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Re: Duniya Da Mela
« Reply #19 on: January 07, 2013, 07:01:27 PM »
Jay Tintin sahi ay, galat hai kise dee kahani nu aaavdee aakhan!!! :angr:
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