hale nhn pauni mein  :blush:

all are gud bt karam veer ji dia lines ch kujh menu meri life di jhalk mili so ma vote for pyara ji

bhehne, aukha bhehne tera aukha. :

chal pai tu wele kuwele  ehte hunda sadde li  sannu khada aukha  X_X
Nale tu ghaint mod aa   jadd lod hundi hajir ho janda
Changa thanku pai  pahla tu meri shyri bachai ajj tu mera dil  :hehe:

hey sweet bht nyc likeya .. nai hunde bahar don't worry

na ji appa wasse b kujh katna nhn ohde ch appa saria feelings payian jehdiya pj nal judiyan baki jidda tusi sabb nu tik laguu kar lao appa nhn kujh katna wadna

dear his means to say .. es rule nu fallow karo

"Shayari Should be of Minimum 3 Paragraphs of 4 Lines Each at least "

lol inni mushkil nal likhi see hon ohnu update kidda kariye  i think sabb ton lambhi meri aa so ess hisaab nal mein ta pahla hi bhar ho gyi :(

Ik war sare rules nu padho!! Critics es criteria de nal hi marks denge.. Jinha diya lines poorian nai.. oh apni apni entry update kro j full marks lene.. with janta voting!
50% janta di voting count hougi te 50% critics' choice hougi. aap sabh nu benti kiti jandi.
Make sure- tuhadi entry sahi criteria de mutabik aa.. je part lea aa te changi trah hi part lao!

sabh ne bahut wadiya likheya aa.. all the very best to each and everyone!

jinha di entry punjabi ch hai... oh english font wich likho tah ke jinha nu nahi aundi punjabi..
oh v padh k tuhanu vote pa skn

menu samjh nnn lagii lines puriya nhn matlab kidda

Pata ni oh kehda tuttiya hoia din see jis din tenu haan kiti see dangra :Laugh:

I missed ma mom :cry:

Nt agree  edda hunda  rabb ne sabb li koi na koi baniya hunda te sabb nu mil janda sardar hon nalo jada insaan di nature wadiya huni chidi aa
Badal te sukhbir badal b sardar hi ne wasse  :14:

Mitra ne entry bhej diti aa so sambh ke rakhio  :blush: