Sat Sri Akal mitro,
Asin tuhanu janta da winner kad ke daseya si, sahibdhaliwal. Ajj asin tuhade agge Critics judge voting da jetu (54 out of 60 points) das rahe han:
Criteria3 cheeza te judge keeta hai:
- Shabda Di Khoobsurti - rate karo dhukwe te nzakat bhre shabad varte gaye k nai.
- Andaz-E-Byan - rate karo lafza nu kis andaaz ch proya gya, shayro shayri dhukwe examples kis tra pesh kite gaye.
- Psycological Effect - rate karo je kise ne kuj dil to likhya hove ohda asar v dil te hunda. So likht da asar kinna k e eh zroor dekhna.
Judge commentsJudge 1:Ssa sareya nu
Sab ton pehlan ta mein competition vich participate karan wale sareya da dhanwaad karna chauga jihna ne is competition nu safal bnaun vich apna yogdaan paya. Sareya ne apne walo bahut wadiya letters likhya c per winner ta ik ne hi ban na c
: so mein charre jatt nu is love letter competition jittan te wadiyan dinda and baki jehre reh gaye aa ohna nu aaun wale nxt comepetion vich hisa jaroor lain lai khenda aa ki pta agli war tuhadi wari lag jaye kite :hehe: ………….charre jatt ne “preeto” nu apni dil khen da tareeka bahut simple te sida jeha rakheya. Letter di starting ton le k by da end tak ehna ne puri puri feeling le k apne dil gal sahi shabad te puri detail vich kahi jis vich kuch dard bharri shayer-o-shayiri v kiti gai . ik time ta letter parh k mera dil senti jeha ho geya c cuz eni romantic te dardnak shayiri parr k harr koi senti ho jauga lol nd bai we wish ki teri preeto eh letter parr k usda pathar dil pigal jave te hamesha lai teri ho jave …. :blink: charre lai do k lines mere walo:
ਚੁਲਹੇ ਅੱਗ ਨਾ ਘੜੇ ਦੇ ਵਿਚ ਪਾਣੀ,
ਰੱਬਾ ਸਾਡੀ ਵੀ ਬਣਾ ਦੇ ਕੋਈ ਰਾਣੀ,
ਓ ਛੜਿਆ ਦੀ ਜੂਨ ਬੁਰੀ
Judge 2:hanji g sarea hi participant ne bhut wadia way naal apne apne dil di feelings beyan kitia luv letter rahi ede lage reho thanu joror koi na koi changi kuri joror mil jao lol....
nd congrtulation to charra bhut sohne tarike naal letter likhya pure feeling, shabbda di khoobsurti,,,bol jani k lafza nu bayan karan da andaz ena wadia c da way he wrote it was jus too gud,,,shuru toh lake end tak full of emotions c dil nu touch kar gaya nd i hope tera pj te shuru hoa luv sirre char jawe
uda ta tareef karni tere assan(easy) nahi
kar sake teri tareff wo alfaz kahan se layo
Judge 3:So jidda k sade sahmne aa k pj te sab to sohna live letter likhan wala banda shara jatt bai aa mai vdhai dina bai ji nu
Share jatt ne boht e sohna prem pattar likhya. Pehli vadia gall k punjabi vich likhya dossri gall k sohne andaaz ch likhya dhukkwe shsbad te sheyro shayri varti. Te teesri likhayi sohni aa bai ji di n fool bootte jihe naal idda lagde c jidda tarya ch chann :hehe:
Te je parbhav si gall kra ta is pakh to eh pattar thoda kamzor lagga baki sab kujh thik thak c
Dhannwaad
Judge 4:I enjoyed reading Shara Jatt's letter. I especially liked the fact that he wrote it out on stationary as an actual letter. It conveyed a lot of feeling and depth.
The poetry/song was a nice touch. The wording he used was that of a typical Punjabi letter, over the top (but affective). After reading the letter you get an idea of how many letters he must have written :) He is a professional. I can imagine him charging people to write letters on their behalf. :)) Hard to believe he's shara with such "makhan-ing" qualities. All joking aside, it was a great letter and I enjoyed reading it. Thank you
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