kya battan ne galib sia ,,,,kuj arz main hi kar dina ,,,ethe hor ta kise ne likhna nhi teriyan akahn baare
 
 
munda akh de ishare naal c gal krda ,,,,
 
sayeri wch v c oh jhande gad da ,,,,,
 
kise de naina ch oh ehna kho gya ,,,
 
gill galib to oh blora oh gya ,,,,
 
har navi kudi naal eh nain bde milunda ,,,
 
pher dil te saata khake ,,,dine peg launda ,,,
 
dukh apne nu sayeri ch sanunda ,,,
 
sardar banke pher lokan nu darunda ,,,,
 
akhan de dukh phire ,,hnere ch lakunda ,,,

eh tan biographi likh ti lagdi a meri .eda bhet nhi kholide
patandera   :hehe:

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Wahji aj tah do entries teh dono hi mundiya diyan.. :happy:

-RG Raje diyan akhan sohneya ne .. pehli wali pic vich kafi innocent lagdiyan dujji vich tah shayari kardiya hi lagdiyan..  :pagel:

thnx kudret raje ,tere ker k pa dittiyan akhaan mai ,
main kiha sade kudrat raje ne comptition shuru kita  te hissa hi lai layiye

naale mubaarkaa ji comp. bahut tez chall riha ,hun tusi v pa deo nain nasheele :hehe: