Author Topic: Critics Winner for PJ Joke Teller Competition (Read 4775 times)

Grenade Singh · « **on:** July 30, 2012, 11:47:45 PM »

Sat Sri Akal mitro,

4 hasmukh judgan ne votan payiya te jetu kaddeya:

Sharha Jatt (Jatt.)

Judge 1:
buhat shoni joke sunayi hass hass ke tid dukhan lagh gaya khaas to te jadh srapanch di vhoti kam kar ke dekhoundi aa
nale sharha jatt de real joke ne buhat hassya
good work

Judge 2:
charha jatt,,,
22 tera joke bhut funny c par k bhut hassa aa reha c,,,mai chunda mera veer ehda de vadiya vadiya joke paunda rawe te sareya da dill kush karda rawe,,,
jehra har ik nu kush rakh sake oss to vadiya frnd duniya te koi ni hunda tu vohna cho ik aa veere tu v ethe har ik nu kush rakhda,,,eh pj tuhadi aapni aa mai te eh hi kehnda k ehda hi ethe changge changge jokes paeya karo te har ik da dill kush rakheya karo,,,

Judge 3:
"To aim is not enough, you must hit!

Well Done! Pehla te sare hi participant da bahut bahut dhanwand k ona ne is competition vich participate kita. Te saree Hi particiants ne bahut hi vadia tareke naal janat nu hausan di khoshi kita Thanx to all. But yh competition aa so wiiner te ek hi ho sakda te oh ne SHraa Jatt .

Congratulation! Enaa ne batut hi vadia tareeke naal joke sunaye puri mehnat te lagaa naal participate kita puraa effort paya ate oh hahaha wala side touch vich bahut vadia sii .Jokes di shurwat hi bahut shone tareke naal kitti and end tak bahut hi vadia tareke naal present kita as compare to other participant.Jehra pauses and stops use kite oh v kafi vadia tarike naal use kite k janta nu samaj lag sake k actual joke hai kk. So I think koi kami nhi si kise cheez di v like full effort, concentration ,mehnat , te lagan naal participate kita. Awsome Performance!!
Karamsingh ji – Enna ne v bahut vdia joke sunaye te I hope sab nu ena de v joke bahut pasand aye Te yeh second number te yakenn k bahut nehre sii to become a winner .so enaa da v bahut bahut dhwand .

Thanksss!!

Judge 4:
Congratulations to Shara Jatt! Very well deserved :)

I would like to say that all 4 of you guys deserve a round of applause from Pj janta for participating and showcasing your talent (ehne ghat jaaneya ne participate kita - lol). Everyone had their own style and did a great job. I would also like to mention that I really liked Sukh’s jokes and his style – very funny..je thora hor effort paunda..it could have been even better.
Also, I liked Karamveer’s entry for his effort – very clear voice, creativity (Talking Tom), easy to understand and follow through his jokes. But, I think his choice of jokes suited better to children/preteens. Otherwise, very nicely done. Great effort!

Winner: Shara jatt de joke bahut funny si, usne effort vi bahut paayea te usdi delivery sab ton vadiya si. Sab ton pehla jokes de funny hon di gal kariye te usde saare joke age appropriate si (young generation/adults de humour wale). Jokes ehne simple vi nahi si ke aapa pehla hi guess kar sakiye end ch ki houga..thora dimaag laun di vi lod pendi si lol.
Appa dekh sakde aa ke ohne effort kinna jaada paayea. Jokes shuru karn ton pehla ohne ik jehri ehna fast bol ke introduction ditti aa – that is very original, creative and shows that he has put in effort and at the same time it shows he is very talented to carry that out. Appa sun sakde kis tarah usne harek joke vich forum members de naam leh ke apni audience naal interact kita va...sirf naam ni laye, situation/person nu deyaan vich rakhde us hisaab naal joke vich add kita. For example, sarpanch – gagan wala joke bahut fit beth da kyonki aapa nu pata sarpanch da hune hune viah hoyea te gagan vi viah te geya si. Aise tarah usne lesbian wale joke ch apne aap nu te chat nu involve kita – eh vi bahut fit beth da. So, itho pata lagda ke usne changi tarah soch ke jokes vich eh originality paayi aa. Usne thore apne life de funny experience vi share kite – very original!
Best thing about Shara jatt was his delivery/style. Delivery of a joke is very important - je joke sanon da style vadiya hove tan ghat funny joke vi jaada funny lag sakda and vice versa. Oh is tarah lag reha si ke jinve oh sachi vich kise sahmne bethe bande nu joke sanounda hove. I felt this was a challenge in this competition because participants are just recording themselves, they are not actually telling a joke to someone. So, I understand how it can come across as they are reading it from somewhere, therefore lacking in voice modulation, expressions and comes off a little monotonous. However, this was not the case with Shara jatt, he overcame this challenge very successfully. His style was even better than his jokes which made them hilarious.
To sum it up - complete package!

Punjabi Janta Forums - Janta Di Pasand · « **on:** July 30, 2012, 11:47:45 PM »

ਕਰਮਵੀਰ ਸਿੰਘ · « **Reply #1 on:** July 31, 2012, 12:34:59 AM »

:break: khush to boht hoge tum :sad:

:D: jokin jo thonu thik lagga vadia aa bt judge no 4 de comments naal mai bilkul v sehmat nai ho sakda joke te joke e hunda banda sun k jehnu khush ho jave fer ohna nu is gall di lor kyo mehsoos ho rahi k jokes vich adult material hona chahida c mainu eh gall bilkul v samjg ni aa rahi :dnk:

█ ▌ﻝαᔕ ▌█ · « **Reply #2 on:** July 31, 2012, 11:49:37 AM »

wow can't believe ehni tareef...meinu ta ajj raat nu neend ni aunni :Laugh:...thank you bai saria da vase eh judge hai kon kon a??
ehni tareef mein ta hawa ch uddayian firda ....patandero dekho kite fatt hi naa jawa :D:

thank you bai saria da...espacially karamveer bai (karamveer da sukh bai de rishte alla joke meinu still hassyi jaanda)
apna sukh bai ( munde ne Canadian born accent vartia : dilrajo alla joke bada ghaint c...oh joke di delivery badi ghaint kiti a
and last but not least bath bai ne v kamal karti...bai de joke v att c ...bath bai nu participate karn toh baad hi mein participate kita...mein keha jad bai try kar sakda phir mein kyun nahi...thank you bai sab toh phela entry pauan liyi...you encouraged us:P

ਕਰਮਵੀਰ ਸਿੰਘ · « **Reply #3 on:** July 31, 2012, 01:08:23 PM »

Aah 4no vale judge kaun aa dasso zra mainu ehna nu hun adult type joke e sunaya karu specially :wait:

N congrats shra bai ji :sad:

gurnoor maan · « **Reply #4 on:** July 31, 2012, 01:57:58 PM »

:shutup: hii

Deleted User · « **Reply #5 on:** July 31, 2012, 03:59:29 PM »

#4 judge kina bolda aa :D:

congrtz majnua

█ ▌ﻝαᔕ ▌█ · « **Reply #6 on:** July 31, 2012, 04:51:04 PM »

Quote from: ਕਰਮਵੀਰ ਸਿੰਘ on July 31, 2012, 01:08:23 PM

Aah 4no vale judge kaun aa dasso zra mainu ehna nu hun adult type joke e sunaya karu specially :wait:

N congrats shra bai ji :sad:

Thank you bai
Patendra shareamm judge nu dhamki deyi jaba sharam kar

Thankyou lado
Vase lado #4 judge always esaay writing A ja A- lenda howga
He/she is pretty gud writer
Opening and closing badi takri a
He/she is using awesome writing skills

Deleted User · « **Reply #7 on:** July 31, 2012, 04:52:52 PM »

menu ah mullanuria lagda oh c lecture den ch number 1 te ay

ਕਰਮਵੀਰ ਸਿੰਘ · « **Reply #8 on:** July 31, 2012, 09:51:14 PM »

Hun koi jvab dauga k mai raula paa deva :waitin:

иαωту мυи∂α · « **Reply #9 on:** July 31, 2012, 09:53:14 PM »

:D: :D: :D: usne ta essay hi likh suteya yr

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Quote from: °•ChAn0•° on July 31, 2012, 03:59:29 PM

#4 judge kina bolda aa :D:

congrtz majnua

sukhbeer · « **Reply #10 on:** July 31, 2012, 10:02:14 PM »

congrats shadeya !!

Grenade Singh · « **Reply #11 on:** July 31, 2012, 10:40:02 PM »

Quote from: ਕਰਮਵੀਰ ਸਿੰਘ on July 31, 2012, 12:34:59 AM

:D: jokin jo thonu thik lagga vadia aa bt judge no 4 de comments naal mai bilkul v sehmat nai ho sakda joke te joke e hunda banda sun k jehnu khush ho jave fer ohna nu is gall di lor kyo mehsoos ho rahi k jokes vich adult material hona chahida c mainu eh gall bilkul v samjg ni aa rahi :dnk:

Jo judges ne likheya oh ohna di raye aa. Jo criteria te ohna ne score ditte oh eh hai:

Funny [1-5] Effort [1-5] Delivery (style) [1-5]

Je tusi chaune aa ke tuhade score ethey ja tuhanu PM vich ditte jaan, dasdayo, mein bhejdeyunga.

Kamz~K · « **Reply #12 on:** July 31, 2012, 11:24:46 PM »

Congrass!!!!
:blowout:

ਕਰਮਵੀਰ ਸਿੰਘ · « **Reply #13 on:** July 31, 2012, 11:43:46 PM »

Quote from: Grenade Singh on July 31, 2012, 10:40:02 PM

Jo judges ne likheya oh ohna di raye aa. Jo criteria te ohna ne score ditte oh eh hai:

Funny [1-5] Effort [1-5] Delivery (style) [1-5]

Je tusi chaune aa ke tuhade score ethey ja tuhanu PM vich ditte jaan, dasdayo, mein bhejdeyunga.

m nt asking to review the result its ok no problem

Hun tuc aah criteria define kite aa sahi aa joke funny hona chahida presentation v mayne rakhdi e bt joke da matter eh tgode criteria ch nai aya n matter inna matter v ni karda shayd main goal hassa auna chahida.

Hun thode criteria ch matter nu koi jagah ni ditti gai fer v thoda judge out of criteria ja k decision de riha eh kida da judge hoya n mera swal aje v khda is di ki vjah k mainu adult matter laina chahida c jad k joke da morive poora hoya public hassi n vote ditti :D:

Hadd e hoyi payi aa

Bille di baloongri · « **Reply #14 on:** August 01, 2012, 01:41:28 AM »

Judge #4 main aa, hanji dasso main tuhadi kidda help kar sakdi? lol

@Karamveer – more age appropriate humour was just a friendly suggestion. If you don’t like it, leave it. Also, you were not rated on “matter”, per je tusi puchde aa ke eh kidda matter karda? Then obviously it matters...joke da content/script joke nu funny banonda.
Je tusi kuch hor puchna judge #4 ton, I am open to questions/explanation but I think it would be better to pm me.
This thread is for Shara Jatt – lets not rain on his parade. Ohnu ohdi jitt da swaad leh lehn dao.

█ ▌ﻝαᔕ ▌█ · « **Reply #15 on:** August 01, 2012, 01:59:42 AM »

Quote from: Bille Di Baloongri on August 01, 2012, 01:41:28 AM

Judge #4 main aa, hanji dasso main tuhadi kidda help kar sakdi? lol

@Karamveer – more age appropriate humour was just a friendly suggestion. If you don’t like it, leave it. Also, you were not rated on “matter”, per je tusi puchde aa ke eh kidda matter karda? Then obviously it matters...joke da content/script joke nu funny banonda.
Je tusi kuch hor puchna judge #4 ton, I am open to questions/explanation but I think it would be better to pm me.
This thread is for Shara Jatt – lets not rain on his parade. Ohnu ohdi jitt da swaad leh lehn dao.

I knew it k ehna takri paragraph writing skills yeah diyian hi ho sakdian
Canadian paragraph formatt use kita
Good job
And thank you sweety

Gujjar NO1 · « **Reply #16 on:** August 01, 2012, 02:33:37 AM »

mubarik aa veer ji
realy good work =D> =D> =D> =D> =D> =D>
:balle: :balle: :balle: :balle: :balle: :balle: :balle: :balle: :balle: :balle: :balle: :balle: :balle: :balle: :balle: :balle: :balle: :balle: :balle: :balle: :balle: :balle: :balle: :balle:

҂ ȿḉặᵰɗἷἧäѷїѧҋ↔ᶀɍǐȶĩṧӊ ₰ · « **Reply #17 on:** August 01, 2012, 04:09:22 AM »

Who the hell is he, he certainly can't be funnier than me

█ ▌ﻝαᔕ ▌█ · « **Reply #18 on:** August 01, 2012, 11:45:02 AM »

Thanks gujr bai

And Hydro its me :happy:

Pj Sarpanch · « **Reply #19 on:** August 01, 2012, 12:14:12 PM »

mubarka 22 ji

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