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Words from my Soul
« on: September 19, 2012, 04:21:19 PM »
Teri nakk vich koka mare lishkara
Jive ambran ch raati chamke dhru tara
Ess muskan nu rakhi tu samb ke sohniye
Jinu dekh ke muskraonda ehh jagg sara...Deep Dezire

ਤੇਰੀ ਨੱਕ ਵਿਚ ਕੋਕਾ ਮਰੇ ਲਿਸ਼ਕਰੇ
ਜਿਵੇ ਅਂਬਰਾ ਤੇ ਚਮਕੇ ਰਾਤੀ ਧ੍ਰੂ ਤਾਰਾ
ਏਸ ਮੁਸਕਾਨ ਨੂ ਤੂ ਰਖੀ ਸਾਂਬ ਕੇ ਸੋਹਣੀਏ
ਜੀਨੁ ਦੇਖ ਕੇ ਹਸਦਾ ਏ ਜੱਗ ਸਾਰਾ ...Deep Dezire

... this was for someone i saw today and liked her smile n nose piecing.

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Teri nakk vich koka mare lishkara
Jive ambran ch raati chamke dhru tara
Ess muskan nu rakhi tu samb ke sohniye
Jinu dekh ke muskraonda ehh jagg sara...Deep Dezire

ਤੇਰੀ ਨੱਕ ਵਿਚ ਕੋਕਾ ਮਾਰੇ ਲਿਸ਼ਕਾਰਾ
ਜਿਵੇ ਅਂਬਰਾ ਤੇ ਚਮਕੇ ਰਾਤੀ ਧ੍ਰੂ ਤਾਰਾ
ਏਸ ਮੁਸਕਾਨ ਨੂ ਤੂ ਰਖੀ ਸਾਂਬ ਕੇ ਸੋਹਣੀਏ
ਜੀਨੁ ਦੇਖ ਕੇ ਹਸਦਾ ਏ ਜੱਗ ਸਾਰਾ ...Deep Dezire

... this was for someone i saw today and liked her smile n nose piecing.

....... there was some mistake in punjabi font'

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Re: Words from my Soul
« Reply #1 on: September 19, 2012, 05:33:23 PM »
Aww, nysh !!  =D>

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Re: Words from my Soul
« Reply #2 on: September 19, 2012, 06:03:12 PM »
Very nice!

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Re: Words from my Soul
« Reply #3 on: September 20, 2012, 10:18:40 PM »
Thanks for appreciation...!!!... here's another one.

shaklo sohne lakha milde, par dil da sohna koi koi
nazra nu ta kayi bha jande, par dil nu jachda koi koi
pani vich ta har koi tarda, agg da darya karda paar hai koi koi ... Deep Dezire

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Re: Words from my Soul
« Reply #4 on: September 21, 2012, 03:18:45 AM »
hmmmm.......  :okk: :okk:

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Re: Words from my Soul
« Reply #5 on: September 21, 2012, 03:35:40 AM »
nice lines

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Re: Words from my Soul
« Reply #6 on: September 21, 2012, 05:03:12 AM »
WORDS FRM MZ SOUL TO DEDICATE THT GOD WHO SND ME  ON THS EARTH


RABB NE IK MINE BANIYI
OHDI KISMAT BAHUT AJEEB BANAYI
 DITTE OHNE MENU KUJH RISHTZA DE MOTTI
 PIR KYN NAL OHNA NU JORDAN WALI IK ZANZEER BANYI
 DEN WALA DE DINDA IK ASISARISHTA MENU BHI
 MEIN BHI KEH SAKDI
WAHH BANAAN WALIZA TU KI MERI TAQDEER BANAZII
MINE GREWAL

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Re: Words from my Soul
« Reply #7 on: September 21, 2012, 09:31:41 AM »
WORDS FRM MZ SOUL TO DEDICATE THT GOD WHO SND ME  ON THS EARTH


RABB NE IK MINE BANIYI
OHDI KISMAT BAHUT AJEEB BANAYI
 DITTE OHNE MENU KUJH RISHTZA DE MOTTI
 PIR KYN NAL OHNA NU JORDAN WALI IK ZANZEER BANYI
 DEN WALA DE DINDA IK ASISARISHTA MENU BHI
 MEIN BHI KEH SAKDI
WAHH BANAAN WALIZA TU KI MERI TAQDEER BANAZII
MINE GREWAL

 ----- Thanks for sharing ... truly amazing words. Cheers! :)

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WORDS FRM MZ SOUL TO DEDICATE THT GOD WHO SND ME  ON THS EARTH


RABB NE IK MINE BANIYI
OHDI KISMAT BAHUT AJEEB BANAYI
 DITTE OHNE MENU KUJH RISHTZA DE MOTTI
 PIR KYN NAL OHNA NU JORDAN WALI IK ZANZEER BANYI
 DEN WALA DE DINDA IK ASISARISHTA MENU BHI
 MEIN BHI KEH SAKDI
WAHH BANAAN WALIZA TU KI MERI TAQDEER BANAZII
MINE GREWAL


Somthing along these lines ... just came to my mind.

LAKH LAB LE TU SOHNE YAAR SAJNA
KISE LENI NI AKHEER TERI SAAR SAJNA
JADO HONI LO POORI, EHNA KARNA HAI PITH TERI VAAR SAJNA
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JE TU LAONI SACHI YAARI, USS RABB NAAL LA
JEDA RAKHDA NI KISE DA UDAAR SAJNA
  ...Deep Dezire

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Re: Words from my Soul
« Reply #8 on: September 21, 2012, 09:49:28 AM »
ohda bhanna mitha lagge

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Re: Words from my Soul
« Reply #9 on: September 21, 2012, 09:53:53 AM »
so true Laraki ji ... jis haal ch maalka tu rakh le uss haal ch raazi reh la ge :)

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Re: Words from my Soul
« Reply #10 on: September 21, 2012, 05:35:28 PM »
Thanks for appreciation...!!!... here's another one.

shaklo sohne lakha milde, par dil da sohna koi koi
nazra nu ta kayi bha jande, par dil nu jachda koi koi
pani vich ta har koi tarda, agg da darya karda paar hai koi koi ... Deep Dezire


That's all true...nice work.

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Re: Words from my Soul
« Reply #11 on: September 21, 2012, 09:16:31 PM »
Thanks .. :)

 

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