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Title: MeRi zInDgI....... PrEeT
Post by: KUDI _CANADA_ DI on September 08, 2008, 12:07:49 PM: ummmmmmmmmmmmm main ajj kuch likhiya....i dono kisse nu samaj aauna ya nai but still post kar rahii aa...

koi zindgi'ch aaya iss tarah ,,ki zindgi de maruthall nu thanda thaar kar giyaa.......
eh zindhi jo kaddi ik pattjharr ton wadd nai cc laggiii,,,,,
oh ajnabii bahaar bahaarr kar giyaa,,,,,,,,

dar cc mainu zindgii di koi khushi kaddi rass nai cc aayii
zindgi eeda gham thalhe dabb gayii cc,,jiss wich khushi di kaddi koi aass vv nai cc aayii,,,
oss ajnabi neh meri zindgi nu ik namii rahh dittii,,,
iss duniya nu khull ke dekhan di,, kisse neh pehlii waarr cc iss dil nu chaahh ditti,,,,,,,

oss ajnabi nu main dil de aase konne wich bithaa liya,,,,
kaddi oss nu doorrr nai hon davagii eh eerada cc banaa liyaa,,,,,,,

pata ne kyon ?????ajj fir iss dil wich ik hallchall hai,,ohi uudassi,,ohi gham,,,ohi bechennii pal pal hai,,,,,,,,,,,
ajj fir socha da ik badall ,,,ik sawall,,,diloo dimaagg te shaa giyaa,,,bada eerada kitta cc iss zindgi'ch kisse nu jagahhh nai dainii,,,fir kyon oh ajnabii iss dil nu eena bhaa giyaa??????kyon oh meri zindgii wich aagiyaa??????????

ummmmmmmmmmmm ,,,,jad answer milgiyaa fir likhongiiiii...........thnxx 4your time guyzzz
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Post by: sukhbeer on September 08, 2008, 12:22:40 PM: pretty good if thats not copy paste
Title: Re: MeRi zInDgI....... PrEeT
Post by: KUDI _CANADA_ DI on September 08, 2008, 12:28:29 PM: sat sri akaal,,

ik gal dasdann eh copy paste ne kittaa,,....thank u
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Post by: Nadeem on September 08, 2008, 12:40:05 PM: DUA KER DA JI KEH TUANU ANSWER MILL JAY TA ASI HOUR VI EHHO JIYA CHNGAA PER SAKIYEE AMMIEN
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Post by: Tezy_Sandhu on September 08, 2008, 01:13:17 PM: Preet its so nice just speechless ek ek word meaning full aa. Tusi kine sohne tareeke naal puri life history likh diti. I just wish kee oh ajnabi tuhanu har khushi deve te dukhan di kade chha v na lage tuhanu..
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Post by: PuNjAbAn_KuRhI on September 08, 2008, 06:28:34 PM: omgggggggggggg preeetttoooo sisu niceeeee haye o rabba kinna wadiya likha omggg inne meaningful words in ryme omg biohut hi wadiya likhea and wow inna sohna hadh hogi hehe keep it up i jus luv it hehe Laugh;) Laugh;) Laugh;) Laugh;)
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Post by: KUDI _CANADA_ DI on September 08, 2008, 07:58:19 PM: sat sri akaal ji,,,,

thnxx nadeemm ji,sandhu ji &kurhi sis ...tusi sab neh pasand kitta jo main likhiya...pata ne main kuch vv sochke nai likhiya dimaagg ch bohat kuch chall rehaa cc pata ne cc lag rehaa ki karaa ..so main sab kuch likhtaa....hahhahahahhaha,,,,,,,
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Post by: Pυηנαвι Sιηgн Sσσямα on September 08, 2008, 09:18:55 PM: kyon oh meri zindgii wich aagiyaa
wahh yaar canada bari deep shyri likhi a yaar tu
mein kiha canada yaar balle balle kar ditti tusi te, kyon oh meri zindgii wich aagiyaa???
bohat hi deep feeling a, it attracts the reader. good job preet yaar.

Kujh Dhadkan ban ke Dhadak gaye,Kujh Radkan ban ke Radak gaye,
Kujh Yaara nu si Parkheya main,Kujh meri Yaari Parkh gaye,
Lakh Bura kehaya kujh Russe na,Kujh Bina Keha hi Harkh gaye,
Kujh waarde si jaan mere to,Kujh Aayi musibat Sarak Gaye,
Kujh Raaho Kande Chukde Rahe,Kujh Hanjhu ban ke Baras gaye,
Kujh zakham Dinde V Thakke na,Kujh Seena Ban ke Tadaf gaye,
Oh Yaar kade Hun nahi Bhulne,Jo Ban zindagi de Haraf gaye.
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Post by: KUDI _CANADA_ DI on September 08, 2008, 11:17:43 PM: hey thnxx jas.....pata ne main ki likhiyaa but tusi sab neh like kitta ta gud ee honaa...thnxx budd
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Post by: ●๋•dểکí вïllø on September 08, 2008, 11:31:10 PM: sho sho nyc preet!!

luving it!!

love:)

--TaN--
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Post by: KUDI _CANADA_ DI on September 08, 2008, 11:39:56 PM: ThAnK jU tHaNk Ju ..............TaNz Laugh;) Laugh;)
Title: Re: MeRi zInDgI....... PrEeT
Post by: ਅਮਨ ਪੰਨੂ on September 09, 2008, 12:44:18 AM: yaar jidda vi kudi ne buhat sohne likhiya aa... really nice..... yaar koi bolke gal kah dinda koi email karke koi letter likhke.... but ahh jahde shayari vich likhiya kudi ne ahde andaajh hi vakhre aa.... yaar really really gud likhiya...........hoor words nai haige tareef karn lai....... :-bd :-bd :-bd
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Post by: PuNjAbAn_KuRhI on September 09, 2008, 08:08:49 AM: hih hih hih
Title: Re: MeRi zInDgI....... PrEeT
Post by: Pind_di_kudi on September 10, 2008, 11:20:00 AM: bahut shoan likhde tusi te sanu te aaj pata laaga dear sis ji
Title: Re: MeRi zInDgI....... PrEeT
Post by: KUDI _CANADA_ DI on September 10, 2008, 01:09:27 PM: sat sri akaal ,,
thnxx aman & pdk sis.hanji sis main vv likh landii aa thora bohat...tuanu pasand aayaa mainu bohat khushi hoyii...
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Post by: Pind_di_kudi on September 10, 2008, 03:44:56 PM: thx ker ke kar dita na begana huh ji ...dekho changa oss no hi keha jnad jis ne chnag likhya howe meri janu tuh chnag likhya mai keh dita but tuh thx keh ke mere hurt de 100000000000 tukde ker diti ji
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Post by: KUDI _CANADA_ DI on September 10, 2008, 03:47:21 PM: ohhhhhhh i,m sorrii sis......hun tusi eeda dasso ki main tuade dil de tukde kiddaa jod sakdii aa??? sad;> sad;>
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Post by: Nadeem on September 10, 2008, 03:54:13 PM: jodany keray oukhay aa kaghzj tay dil bana dio lau ji jod giya dil
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Post by: KUDI _CANADA_ DI on September 10, 2008, 03:59:26 PM: acha ji fir ta kam sokhaa ee aa....hunni jod dindii aa main Pagel:) Pagel:) Pagel:)
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Post by: Nadeem on September 10, 2008, 04:12:41 PM: lau ji main jod dita hour koi houkam
(http://img28.picoodle.com/data/img28/3/9/10/f_13719875034m_258d69d.jpg) (http://www.picoodle.com/view.php?img=/3/9/10/f_13719875034m_258d69d.jpg&srv=img28)
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Post by: Pind_di_kudi on September 11, 2008, 02:36:45 PM: tut peneya nadem kolo push le is no shb ilza ahnde ne hakeen shab no ji
Title: Re: MeRi zInDgI....... PrEeT
Post by: Nadeem on September 11, 2008, 02:37:43 PM: LAO JI EK TA DIL JOD DITA TA THX VI NAI KIYA
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Post by: Pind_di_kudi on September 11, 2008, 02:44:06 PM: KITEH JUDEYA TUTE DIL NI JUDEYA AHNDEYA JUDI NA HEHEHEHE
Title: Re: MeRi zInDgI....... PrEeT
Post by: KUDI _CANADA_ DI on January 17, 2009, 06:45:21 PM: Mudaatt ho gayi tanhaiyan nu gujjre..fir vv ehan aakha ch khamoshi kyon hai????torr ditta mohabbat ton yakeen jiss neh mera...ajj vv oh shakhash pyar karan de kabill kyon hai????chunn chunn ke jihdiyan yaadan nu main aapni zindgi chon kadd ditta...ajj vv oh mere din meriyan raatan ch shamil kyon hai????
raass na aayi mainu chahhat jiss di ajj vv mere dil te oss di hakumatt kyon hai???khatam ho giya jo rishta oh ajj vv saahh le reha hai....mere viratmaann ch jindha mera aateett kyon hai???

kyon hai?????????????????????

lao ji ajj main eh khatam kar ditta..par jawaab haje vv mere kol haini...
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Post by: █ ▌ﻝαᔕ ▌█ on January 17, 2009, 06:46:58 PM: sad0049 sad0049
sanu yaar a shyer kon suno ga
Title: Re: MeRi zInDgI....... PrEeT
Post by: PuNjAbAn_KuRhI on January 17, 2009, 06:50:50 PM: wow omg kinna wadiya likhea
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Post by: █ ▌ﻝαᔕ ▌█ on January 17, 2009, 06:54:50 PM: yaar gulaboo a sare shyer nu ik karde Kcd liyi
te Ohno stick karde shyeri topic vich
sachii bohat sohna likhia yaar
Title: Re: MeRi zInDgI....... PrEeT
Post by: PuNjAbAn_KuRhI on January 17, 2009, 06:59:52 PM: koi zindgi'ch aaya iss tarah ,,ki zindgi de maruthall nu thanda thaar kar giyaa.......
eh zindhi jo kaddi ik pattjharr ton wadd nai cc laggiii,,,,,
oh ajnabii bahaar bahaarr kar giyaa,,,,,,,,

dar cc mainu zindgii di koi khushi kaddi rass nai cc aayii
zindgi eeda gham thalhe dabb gayii cc,,jiss wich khushi di kaddi koi aass vv nai cc aayii,,,
oss ajnabi neh meri zindgi nu ik namii rahh dittii,,,
iss duniya nu khull ke dekhan di,, kisse neh pehlii waarr cc iss dil nu chaahh ditti,,,,,,,

oss ajnabi nu main dil de aase konne wich bithaa liya,,,,
kaddi oss nu doorrr nai hon davagii eh eerada cc banaa liyaa,,,,,,,

pata ne kyon ?????ajj fir iss dil wich ik hallchall hai,,ohi uudassi,,ohi gham,,,ohi bechennii pal pal hai,,,,,,,,,,,
ajj fir socha da ik badall ,,,ik sawall,,,diloo dimaagg te shaa giyaa,,,bada eerada kitta cc iss zindgi'ch kisse nu jagahhh nai dainii,,,fir kyon oh ajnabii iss dil nu eena bhaa giyaa??????kyon oh meri zindgii wich aagiyaa??????????

Mudaatt ho gayi tanhaiyan nu gujjre..fir vv ehan aakha ch khamoshi kyon hai????torr ditta mohabbat ton yakeen jiss neh mera...ajj vv oh shakhash pyar karan de kabill kyon hai????chunn chunn ke jihdiyan yaadan nu main aapni zindgi chon kadd ditta...ajj vv oh mere din meriyan raatan ch shamil kyon hai????
raass na aayi mainu chahhat jiss di ajj vv mere dil te oss di hakumatt kyon hai???khatam ho giya jo rishta oh ajj vv saahh le reha hai....mere viratmaann ch jindha mera aateett kyon hai???

kyon hai?????????????????????
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Post by: ╞→Ʈ৸ę ਦੇਸੀ ਜੁਲੀਅਟ←╡ on January 18, 2009, 01:06:17 PM: really gud yaar keep it up no words fo it 8->
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Post by: ღ♥Bharind♥ღ on January 18, 2009, 01:38:00 PM: :-bd :-bd :-bd :-bd :-bd :-bd relliii niceeeeeeeeeeee....
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Post by: █ ▌ﻝαᔕ ▌█ on January 12, 2011, 09:58:02 PM: :Laugh: :Laugh: :Laugh: :Laugh: :Laugh: