Author Topic: A Love Story... itz wonderful... (Read 12124 times)

LOVE19 · « **on:** October 16, 2007, 05:08:59 PM »

[!--coloro:#ff0000--][span style=\"color:#ff0000\"][!--/coloro--] A Love Story... itz wonderful...
IF this doesnt touch you,
you have
no
heart.........

Daniel and Jasmine are sitting alone in
the park
one night....

Daniel: I guess we are the left overs
in
this
world

Jasmine: I think so... All of my
friends
have
boyfriends and we are only the 2
persons
left in
this world without any special person
in
our lives

Daniel: Yup I don't know what to do

Jasmine: I know! We'll play a game

Daniel: What game?

Jasmine: i'll be your girlfriend for
30 days
and you
will be my boyfriend

Daniel: That's a great plan in fact i
don't
have
anything to do for the following
weeks...

DAY 1:

They watch their first movie and they
both
touched
in a romantic film

DAY 4:

They went to the beach and had a
picnic...Daniel
and Jasmine had their quality time
together

DAY 12:

Daniel invited Jasmine to a circus and
they rode
on
a Horror House....Jasmine was scared
and
she
touched Daniel's hand but she touched
someone
else's hand and they both laughed...

DAY 15:

They saw a fortune teller down the road
and they
asked for their future advice and the
fortune teller
said: "My darlings, Please don't waste
the
time of
your life... spend the rest of your
time
together
happily" Then tears flow out from the
teller's eyes

DAY 20:

Jasmine invited Daniel to go to the
hill
and they
saw a meteor...Jasmine mumbled
something

DAY 28:

They sat on the bus and because of a
bumby road
Jasmine gave her first kiss to Daniel
by
accident

DAY 29:

11:37pm

Jasmine and Daniel sat in the park
where
they
first
decided to play this game...

Daniel: I'm tired Jasmine...Do you want
any
drinks? I'll buy you one.. I'll just
go down
the road

Jasmine: Apple Juice that's all

Daniel: Wait for me....

20mins later... a stranger approached
Jasmine

Stranger: Are you a friend of Daniel?

Jasmine: Why yes? What happened?

Stranger: A reckless drunken driver ran
over
Daniel
and he is critical in the hospital

11:57pm

The doctor went out of the emergency
room and
he
handed out an apple juice and a letter

Doctor: We found this in daniel's
pocket

Jasmine reads the letter and it says:

Jasmine, This past few days, i realized
you are a
really cute girl and i am really
falling for
you..Your
cherished.... smile you were everything
when we
played this game..... Before this game
would
end...I would like you to be my
girlfriend
for the
rest of my life.... I love you
Jasmine....

Jasmine crumples the paper and shouted:

"Daniel ! i don't want you to die... I
love
you...Remember that night when we saw
a meteor,
I mumbled something... I mumbled that I
wish we
would be together forever and never end
this
game.
Please don't leave me Daniel.... I love
you! You
cannot do this to me!"

Then the clock strikes 12

Daniel's heart stop pumping

THEN IT WAS THE 30TH DAY........

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Punjabi Janta Forums - Janta Di Pasand · « **on:** October 16, 2007, 05:08:59 PM »

Sahiba_Sohni_Mutiar · « **Reply #1 on:** October 16, 2007, 06:10:35 PM »

oo my god this was a touching story. Real good job.So don't wait for the person u love to tell u that ..if u love that person say it sooner u feel it.Otherwise tusi ikele reh jaonge te pyar karan wala kite door chala jawega.good job again love 19

LOVE19 · « **Reply #2 on:** December 01, 2007, 08:58:33 AM »

sahiba fikr na karr mein pehla hee keh ditta hai byeeeee

miiszjattii · « **Reply #3 on:** January 24, 2008, 08:36:43 PM »

its soooo sad :(

Ghandi_Sewa_Hajir_8 · « **Reply #4 on:** January 24, 2008, 10:54:53 PM »

omg this is so sad shit really pplz should tell if they luv someone but hey this world is a mean place to live in log do pyar karan walya nu kadda chan nal nahi jeen dinda i have seen someone so i rather stay alone but it was really touchin

♥♥ ☬ ♥♥ sunny_austria ♥♥ੴ♥♥ · « **Reply #5 on:** January 25, 2008, 12:24:43 AM »

koii puchhe saatho dard inkaar da kii hunda
koii puchhe saatho rang bahaar da kii hunda.......

guzar jaani jinha dii vich vichhore mar marke
koii puchhe unha ton saath yaar da kii hunda........

assi yaar nu rab te ishq nu ibadat keh baithe
lokii puchhan saatho asool pyar da kii hunda.......

apne jisam cho har boond lahoo dii baha daiye
koii puchhe je saatho hanju yaar da kii hunda......

har waar sahaa main ohde naina da has haske
main kii janaa fat teer te talwaar da kii hunda........

ishq umraan da rach giyaa jinha de haddi
oh ki jaanan pyaar din do-chaar da ki hunda......

har janam langhiya 'veer' da teri udeek vich
koii puchhe saatho swaad intzaar da kii hunda

w39: w39:

miiszjattii · « **Reply #6 on:** January 27, 2008, 04:27:31 PM »

chick, i totally agree with you... i dont know y people dont mind thier own business, i mean who the heck r they to tell someone how to act???

har insaan nu apni choice naal jeene da chance milna chahida ah

i hate following society's rules

society kaun hundi ah menu dassan nu ki main kede kapre wear kara, keda food khama, te act kive kara

i have my own rules :)

i wear wat i want, eat wat i want, n i act how i want... but i alwayz have to listen to my parents when it comes to decision making so i dont really mind

Ghandi_Sewa_Hajir_8 · « **Reply #7 on:** January 27, 2008, 07:59:29 PM »

i knw jatti punjabi pplz do tht they be like oh shit this gurls is bad cuz shes wearin tht shirkt lolz so yah i hate tht to pplz oh well i never care wht they say i alwayz do wht i wanna do lolz

Pangeybaz Ashu · « **Reply #8 on:** January 29, 2008, 07:24:48 PM »

hey hi love i read al the story.... its realli tuchin mate... i realli liked the story.... and i wish that this wont happen wth other love birds n the world....

catct u laterr... waheguru mehar rakhe love birds tai....

Punjaban.Jatti · « **Reply #9 on:** January 31, 2008, 04:22:29 AM »

Ishq Ishq na karyia kar ni, vekh ishq de kare
Es ishq ne joban rutte kai lutte kai mare
Ishq kamavan aye jehre niana de vanjare
Jattan de putt jogi ho gaye chadke takt hazare

Pangeybaz Ashu · « **Reply #10 on:** January 31, 2008, 04:34:25 AM »

Dil Sadda Tudd Deta, Aye TU kyon Keta..?
Sanu Gallian ch Roll Deta, Aye Tu kyon Keta..?
Asi ta tere nal Sacha pyar kar de sii,
Par Tu sadde Nal Mazk keta, Aye tu kyo Keta..?

Punjaban.Jatti · « **Reply #11 on:** January 31, 2008, 04:55:13 AM »

nazar jithe nahi jaandi, hawa uthon hi aandi ah
soch tera eh pyar kadey akh roj rulaandi ah
main kai janama tou karran udeekan
koi taa samjhega
jo jaljala ik dil vich houli houli thamje ga
mere saah kisi de karje vich
ajj gotey khaande ah
lakh jatan karey par sabi
pal pal dubde jaande ahâ€¦..

Pangeybaz Ashu · « **Reply #12 on:** February 01, 2008, 05:29:15 AM »

patharon ko kisne dekha hai
log dillon ke saath khellte hein
heera samaj ke dil jeet-tey hein
agley he din khillona bana ker phenk dete hein

Ghandi_Sewa_Hajir_8 · « **Reply #13 on:** February 01, 2008, 05:32:22 AM »

Har Dhadkan ch ek Raaj Hunda ae,
Har Gall nu dassan da vi ek Andaaz hunda ae,
Jadon tal Thokar n alagge Bewafayi diâ€¦..
Har kisi nu Apne pyaar te Naaz hunda ae.

Pangeybaz Ashu · « **Reply #14 on:** February 01, 2008, 05:38:15 AM »

Aapki aankho ki kashish ne hai ye mujhko ehsaas dilaya
Masoom apke chehre ne dil mein ek khwab jagaya
Kami si hai kisi ki mere iss jeevan mein ye dil ne farmaya
Jab hue tanha, tanhayee ne humein aapka ehsaas karaya
Khayalo ki manzil mein jisi talaash humne
Khuda ne shaklo-shurat se hai tumhe banaya
Dundle se uss aks ka jiske karte the hum intezaar khwabon mein
Aaj humein zindagi ne use aapke roop hai humse milaya

for u mani

Ghandi_Sewa_Hajir_8 · « **Reply #15 on:** February 01, 2008, 05:43:18 AM »

Koi jit janda bazzi gallan char karke .
Koi jitt janda laarean da vapaar karke .
Je kismat to bina kuch mil janda
Asin kive haar jande sacha pyar karke

Pangeybaz Ashu · « **Reply #16 on:** February 01, 2008, 06:46:49 AM »

teri muskaan ka nasha halka,
is madhoshi bhari shaam ka nasha halka,
mere pyar ka nasha halka,
gum ho jaane do mujhe apne aagosh me halka halka......

Punjaban.Jatti · « **Reply #17 on:** February 02, 2008, 05:15:41 AM »

Ankhon mai khushi,
labon pae hasi,
ghum ka kahi bhi naam na ho,
aapko jahan ki sari khushiyan mile
in khushiyon ki kabhi sham na ho....

Ghandi_Sewa_Hajir_8 · « **Reply #18 on:** February 11, 2008, 05:16:20 AM »

Phool Khilna Chahta Hai, Kali Khilne Nahin Deti
Dil Milnaa Chahtaa Hai, Kismat Milne Nahin Deti

Punjaban.Jatti · « **Reply #19 on:** February 11, 2008, 05:44:30 AM »

Dil ko aadat si hai chout khaane ki,
Bheegi huyi palko ke saath muskuraane ki...
Kaash anjaam-e-wafa pehle se jaan jaate ,
ToH koshish bhi na karte dil lagaane ki...

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