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Title: sat shri akal sab nu my self Ash'haaz
Post by: ash_haaz on February 08, 2013, 06:48:44 AM
sat shri akal mere wlo sab nu. .
My self Ash'haaz urf Jai.
m new in dis
forum. .  .
Simple te friendly aa ji. . Ithe Tuhade naal dosti paun aaya.. . Aj to 7 saal pehla
ik ghatna ne mainu eho jia hila
ditta c. . K is kamle nu likhna
sikha gyi . . Fir aj to tin saal pehla
ik insaan mileya jis ne kia tu
likhna band kar de. . M likhna
band kar dittta . .par hun ohi
shad gya aa ta apa hazir aa
thode kol har us dukh di
daastaan lai k jo zindgi ne
ditte. . . Aas karda Tuhanu mere
LIkheya passand aauga. .... Kuj
lines jis to thonu pta lagg jau
ash'haaz cheez ki aa.
.
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:
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Yaaro.
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ska.
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Title: Re: sat shri akal sab nu my self Ash'haaz
Post by: ღ--● ♥ ĦṒṓṝ ♥ ●--ღ on February 08, 2013, 07:22:41 AM
welcome to punjabi janta Ash'haaz...

nice sharing... apna dukh shaayri ch byaan karta.....
Title: Re: sat shri akal sab nu my self Ash'haaz
Post by: ash_haaz on February 08, 2013, 07:38:58 AM
welcome to punjabi janta Ash'haaz...

nice sharing... apna dukh shaayri ch byaan karta.....

thankx hoor ji . . N ya dukha di dukaan souda jazbaata da.
Title: Re: sat shri akal sab nu my self Ash'haaz
Post by: G@RRy S@NDHU on February 08, 2013, 07:52:23 AM
Welcome bai.. :)
hope uy enjoy here..
Title: Re: sat shri akal sab nu my self Ash'haaz
Post by: ღ--● ♥ ĦṒṓṝ ♥ ●--ღ on February 08, 2013, 07:55:37 AM
thankx hoor ji . . N ya dukha di dukaan souda jazbaata da.



agar tusi hor shaayri share karna chahnde ho ta click on this link http://punjabijanta.com/shayari/ (http://punjabijanta.com/shayari/)
ithe apne naam da new topic bana leo like ( shaayri by ash_haaz ) jida wi tuhanu wadiya lage .
then same topic wich apni shaayri post kar deya karo .............
Title: Re: sat shri akal sab nu my self Ash'haaz
Post by: ash_haaz on February 08, 2013, 07:57:12 AM
Welcome bai.. :)
hope uy enjoy here..

dhanwad bai ji.
.
Bai ithe self written poetry da section alag ni hai. . .m ap likhda poetry. Thodi bhuti . Dso kithe post krya kra
Title: Re: sat shri akal sab nu my self Ash'haaz
Post by: G@RRy S@NDHU on February 08, 2013, 07:59:44 AM
dhanwad bai ji.
.
Bai ithe self written poetry da section alag ni hai. . .m ap likhda poetry. Thodi bhuti . Dso kithe post krya kra
i think hoor ne sbh clr krta bai.. Eh mod. Ne shyaari section de.. So help krnge tuhaadi..
Title: Re: sat shri akal sab nu my self Ash'haaz
Post by: ash_haaz on February 08, 2013, 08:00:44 AM
agar tusi hor shaayri share karna chahnde ho ta click on this link [url]http://punjabijanta.com/shayari/[/url] ([url]http://punjabijanta.com/shayari/[/url])
ithe apne naam da new topic bana leo like ( shaayri by ash_haaz ) jida wi tuhanu wadiya lage .
then same topic wich apni shaayri post kar deya karo .............


thankx dear . . N iko vaar topic creat kar k us ch hor poetry reply ch likhda rha ja. .har vaar new topic . .nwi poetry lyi ?
Title: Re: sat shri akal sab nu my self Ash'haaz
Post by: ღ--● ♥ ĦṒṓṝ ♥ ●--ღ on February 08, 2013, 08:04:52 AM
thankx dear . . N iko vaar topic creat kar k us ch hor poetry reply ch likhda rha ja. .har vaar new topic . .nwi poetry lyi ?

1 topic wich hi tusi sara stuff post kar deya karo , ohi better rahuga .......
topic da name self written poetry by ash_haaz rakh liyo thats better.....
Title: Re: sat shri akal sab nu my self Ash'haaz
Post by: Qainaat on February 08, 2013, 08:06:56 AM
Hey hii.. :smile:

Welcome.. Khush-amadeed :pagel: Apki saari shayeri toh filhaal hum par nahi paay lekin jitni parhi us se ye toh zahir ho geya ke kafi dhuk bhari hai.. But I must say you wrote some nice lines..

Ap yahan aate raho dhekna apko apne dhuk kaise bhoolte hain :loll: woh kya hai ke yahan par takreeban har cheez hassati zyada hai phir chahe woh kuch members hon, unki ajeeb o gareeb batain ho ya soch ho :pagel:

I hope you have a great time over here :)
Title: Re: sat shri akal sab nu my self Ash\'haaz
Post by: ash_haaz on February 08, 2013, 08:15:32 AM
1 topic wich hi tusi sara stuff post kar deya karo , ohi better rahuga .......
topic da name self written poetry by ash_haaz rakh liyo thats better.....

bt dear je main ik e post ch sara matter pa dauga ta . Old posts ta hiden ho jaan gia reply aun naal. . M bht stuf post karna aa. . . N je ik e post ch m post kar dau ta members n frndz nu kida pta laggu k ithe kuj nwa post hoya aa. . Sad

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Hey hii.. :smile:

Welcome.. Khush-amadeed :pagel: Apki saari shayeri toh filhaal hum par nahi paay lekin jitni parhi us se ye toh zahir ho geya ke kafi dhuk bhari hai.. But I must say you wrote some nice lines..

Ap yahan aate raho dhekna apko apne dhuk kaise bhoolte hain :loll: woh kya hai ke yahan par takreeban har cheez hassati zyada hai phir chahe woh kuch members hon, unki ajeeb o gareeb batain ho ya soch ho :pagel:

I hope you have a great time over here :)
qaina @ thankx ji Bas Zindgi Aur KUJH logo ne mil k is bande jo shayar bna diya. . Koshish kruga k sab jo KUJH asha padh ne ko de sku. . N ya Main to aaya hee yHa new frndz bnane hu. . HaHaHa
Title: Re: sat shri akal sab nu my self Ash'haaz
Post by: ღ--● ♥ ĦṒṓṝ ♥ ●--ღ on February 08, 2013, 08:19:39 AM
bt dear je main ik e post ch sara matter pa dauga ta . Old posts ta hiden ho jaan gia reply aun naal. . M bht stuf post karna aa. . . N je ik e post ch m post kar dau ta members n frndz nu kida pta laggu k ithe kuj nwa post hoya aa. . Sad

acctualy jisnu tuhadi poetry pasand ayi ohne nal di nal hi read kar laini hai, replies agar aye ta same tym te hi aun ge...
+ jisne lyk kiti  tuhadi poetry ohne old new sab read kar laina same topic ch ....

otherwise 0 replies wale wi shaayri topic ne ithe :loll:

agge jida tuhanu theek lage ....
Title: Re: sat shri akal sab nu my self Ash'haaz
Post by: ash_haaz on February 08, 2013, 08:23:48 AM
acctualy jisnu tuhadi poetry pasand ayi ohne nal di nal hi read kar laini hai, replies agar aye ta same tym te hi aun ge...
+ jisne lyk kiti  tuhadi poetry ohne old new sab read kar laina same topic ch ....

otherwise 0 replies wale wi shaayri topic ne ithe :loll:

agge jida tuhanu theek lage ....

hahahahaha. . Thankew ji . . Chalo apa lagge gaah paun poetry da. . Hor koi padhe na padhe . Tusi padh de rio. . . Hahaha
Title: Re: sat shri akal sab nu my self Ash'haaz
Post by: G@RRy S@NDHU on February 08, 2013, 08:25:49 AM
acctualy jisnu tuhadi poetry pasand ayi ohne nal di nal hi read kar laini hai, replies agar aye ta same tym te hi aun ge...
+ jisne lyk kiti  tuhadi poetry ohne old new sab read kar laina same topic ch ....

otherwise 0 replies wale wi shaayri topic ne ithe :loll:

agge jida tuhanu theek lage ....
ah kudi te bai baahli syaani ah 8->
j ajje v satisfy ni hoeea tn hor swaal krla bhaawe.. 8->
bhaale pyaar naal smjhaunde ah :he:
Title: Re: sat shri akal sab nu my self Ash\'haaz
Post by: ash_haaz on February 08, 2013, 08:26:30 AM
n m hun us post ch e reply kar k add kra poetry? ?

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ah kudi te bai baahli syaani ah 8->
j ajje v satisfy ni hoeea tn hor swaal krla bhaawe.. 8->
bhaale pyaar naal smjhaunde ah :he:

na na bai muk gye swaal. Hahahahahaha
Title: Re: sat shri akal sab nu my self Ash'haaz
Post by: ღ--● ♥ ĦṒṓṝ ♥ ●--ღ on February 08, 2013, 08:30:15 AM
ah kudi te bai baahli syaani ah 8->
j ajje v satisfy ni hoeea tn hor swaal krla bhaawe.. 8->
bhaale pyaar naal smjhaunde ah :he:
  :waitin: :waitin:
hahaha bas bas lol  :pagel:

n m hun us post ch e reply kar k add kra poetry? ?

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na na bai muk gye swaal. Hahahahahaha
tusi same topic ch post karo , i think ohi wadiya rahu ga.... even tuhada sara stuff iko topic ch sambhiya rahu :)  :happy: