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Kahanikaar bann na saukha hai ya fer geetkaar?

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rabbdabanda:
hanji mitro aapo apne sujav pesh kro....
k ik kahanikaar (writer) ban na saukha hai ?
ya
fer ik geetkaar? (lyricist)

i know dowa wich jameen asmaan da farq aa... par ajjkal de daur nu dekhdean hoea mere mann ch khyal aya..
ajkal di jawani ...dilan wale rog lawa k....fer jad dil tuttda hai te gaane likhan beh jande... potry krde ne...
nikke nikke pungarde hoye shayer main bahut dekh reha dino din jinha di ginnti wadh di ja rahi hai...
par kujh mere warge jinha de jazbaat shyd kujh jyada lambhe ho jande jo geetan wich poore nahi aunde...
tan oh kahania likhde ne...

tuhanu ki lagda? dil tuttan ton baad kis paase jana chaida? :thinking:
jis de nal agge vi fayida howe... jiwe agge ja k life wich j oh ehna dowa professions wichon koi v chunnde te kis wich jyada fayida? :mean:

:pagel:

ਕਰਮਵੀਰ ਸਿੰਘ:
Pta ni yaar :dnk:
Vanngia dono e ikko jihia ne bt kawita likhna aukha aa kyo k boht sare jazbata nu thode lafza vich kaid karna kafi aukha hunda kawita likhan nu tuka te har koi jod lainda bt asli likhari ohi jisde jazbaat jhalkan lafza cho fer e swad aunda so bt khani likhan layi jazbata de naal naal soch da udaru matlan imaginative hona v zroori aa

So eh bande de zehen te depend karda k ohde ch kis tra di kabliyat e

rabbdabanda:

--- Quote from: ਕਰਮਵੀਰ ਸਿੰਘ on January 19, 2013, 09:37:01 PM ---Pta ni yaar :dnk:
Vanngia dono e ikko jihia ne bt kawita likhna aukha aa kyo k boht sare jazbata nu thode lafza vich kaid karna kafi aukha hunda kawita likhan nu tuka te har koi jod lainda bt asli likhari ohi jisde jazbaat jhalkan lafza cho fer e swad aunda so bt khani likhan layi jazbata de naal naal soch da udaru matlan imaginative hona v zroori aa

So eh bande de zehen te depend karda k ohde ch kis tra di kabliyat e

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gal sahi aa karme veer tuhadi..

par kahani likhni v saukhi nai... patience bahut chaidi... geetkaari ya shayiri, god gifted hundi. lorchad gayi te adhe ghante ch poori kavita likh ho jandi je nahi te kayi kayi saal, 2 linea te hi rukki rehndi kalam. par ek kahanikaar ban'na bahut jyada aukha, mere hisaab nal... bakia da pata nahi.. :wait:

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