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rabbdabanda · « **on:** May 02, 2014, 01:40:49 AM »

Sat Shri Akal sajjno!

Shayiri Rabb de layi theme layi,

es poll wich voting karo ji!

Dhanwaad!

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RABB DE LAYI SHAYRI

GUJJAR NO.1

mere dill da weda ujad gaya
mera yaar mere tu weachd gaya

main kenu payar de geet sunaa
meri qismat da sitara weged gaya

har raat nu chan bolanda ey
mere dill de zakhm sunada ey
mere payar diyan gallan kar kar ke
o channi naal udanda ey

meri haavan vich o rehnda ey
o apni gall te akd gaya

mere dill da weda ujad gaya
mera yaar mere tu weachd gaya

menu dill te koi ikhtiyar nai
eyhnu tere sawa payar nai
ethee koi karda payar nai
ethee mousam naal bihaar nai

mere dill nu pera vich regd gaya
menu waang dushmana jikd gaya

mere dill da weda ujad gaya
mera yaar mere tu weachd gaya

PANGEBAAZ MUTYAR URF NIMANI DEEP

Har Vele Kara Sukrana Rabb Da

Har vele kara sukrana rabb da
rakhda khyaal hai jo sabda
har vele kara sukrana rabb da

na kade maada sochain , na kade maada kahain
os rabb di rajja vich , raji sada rahain
jhukdi na kise aage ,waheguru de dar te kardi haan sajda
har vele karain sukrana rabb da

teri es duniya de lok v ajeeb ne
karde ne dhokha jo v aounde kreeb ne
na koi gila , na shikwa kara
vakho vakh hunda a subah sabda
har vele kara sukrana rabb da

jo tu dukh dite hasske kbool kite
dukhain nu hasseya ch badaln vale kuj dost dite
de k khusi de bhandar ,diti meri zindgi sudahar
dita janam anmol “deep” nu ,jo labheya na labhda
har vele kara sukrana rabb da

GARRY SANDHU FARIDKOTIA

Rabb hai k jabh hai..
Milda hi nhi..!
Ethe jorr laya sabh hai..
Milda hi nhi..!

Kuj paa lainde jungla cho..
Kuj mandra vich v taras rhe..!
Kuj jhuggi vich v labh lainde..
Kuj paise lakhan khrch rhe..!
Ethe sbh andar rabb hai..
Dikhda hi nhi..!
Rabb hai k jabh hai.......

Je rabb nu pauna "sandhu'a" oye..
Shd jhoothe eh dikhawe..!
Ethe sach syane aakh gye..
Rabb Milda Greebi Daave..!
Kyu goorhi neendar soun gya tu..
Hillda hi nhi..!
Rabb hai k jabh hai..
Milda hi nhi..!
Ethe jorr laya sabh hai..
Milda hi nhi..!

© Garry Sandhu Faridkotiya

DESI DESI

Rabba

Mai naa samjh haan rabba tainu samjhawa kive,
Apni majboori da ehsaas tainu dilawa kive,
Tu te khush e apni dunia vich par dhillon nu v ta dass,
Apni ujjadi dunia vsawa kive (rajdeep dhillon)

₦ł ₮ɆⱤ₳ Ɏ₳₳Ɽ ₥₳Ⱡ₳₦₲ JɆⱧ₳

Rabba naa kuj mangna hai taitho,
na hai koi gila,
Bhawe asmaan te chahd de mainu,
bhawe mitti de vich mila,
Lok ajkal aap hi rabb ho gaye ne,
changia kittia krayia da milda na koi sila,
Bande di aukat na tere agge koi,
bhawe jihnu karde abad mint vich
Chahe kise di dunia dewe hila,
Murshid nai milda injh kehnde,
jinne marzi mathe pitt lai te,
jinna marzi chilla,
Daulat shohrat loka nu baksh de,
mainu sirf ghut sabar da pila.

KARAMVIR SINGH

Hun oh mere dil vich nai rehnda
Pehla te dil ohde chaawaa naal bharya rehnda c ,
Pehla ta jad mai kuj puchda c ohvi kuj kehnda c,
baba! Merya hungarya ch kol beh hungara v bhar lainda c,
Pehla te kai galla oh bina bolya hi sun lainda c,
Pehla te mere har kamm vich braber hissa lainda c,

Par ajj pta ni kyo dil khali khali lagda e ,
Koi te khtaa hoyi e ,eh khyaal dil nu thagda e,
Pehla jithe swer hundi c hun athan charya lagda e ,
Pehla nirmal chashma c jo hun shappad bharya lagda e ,
Khyaal ujjde rooh khali jyo full koi jhadya lagda e.

Shayd hun oh mere dil vich nahi rehnda :(

Punjabi Janta Forums - Janta Di Pasand · « **on:** May 02, 2014, 01:40:49 AM »

Mani Kaur · « **Reply #1 on:** May 02, 2014, 03:28:19 AM »

Aww Saab ne bhut sohna likheya 8->
Mai paati aa vote GOOD LUCK Saab nu :okk:

!!!!yenki!!!!. · « **Reply #2 on:** May 02, 2014, 03:39:36 AM »

bahot sohna likhya

but apan topic ton paree ho gaye thoda jya

shayari rabb layi

so apan duniyadari ton parre hatke os malak di vadiyayi hi karni c

baki bahot sohna likhya sab ne :smile:

Gujjar NO1 · « **Reply #3 on:** May 02, 2014, 06:06:22 AM »

Quote from: ❀♥ Jungli Billi ♥❀ on May 02, 2014, 03:28:19 AM

Aww Saab ne bhut sohna likheya 8->
Mai paati aa vote GOOD LUCK Saab nu :okk:

jungli billiyan vi vote poundia hawwwwww

:
just kiding sister :love:

!!!!yenki!!!!. · « **Reply #4 on:** May 02, 2014, 04:33:29 PM »

kisnu vote dyan :waitin:

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Mani Kaur · « **Reply #5 on:** May 02, 2014, 08:50:13 PM »

Quote from: gujjar NO1 on May 02, 2014, 06:06:22 AM

jungli billiyan vi vote poundia hawwwwww :
just kiding sister :love:

haha bro bakia da ni pata but eh bili ne ta avde bro nu he payi :love:

Gujjar NO1 · « **Reply #6 on:** May 02, 2014, 10:11:11 PM »

Quote from: ❀♥ Cute Mano Billi ♥❀ on May 02, 2014, 08:50:13 PM

haha bro bakia da ni pata but eh bili ne ta avde bro nu he payi :love:

thanx gudiyee :smile:

ਪੰਗੇਬਾਜ਼ ਜੱਟ maan · « **Reply #7 on:** May 03, 2014, 12:22:20 AM »

:excited: :excited: :excited: kisse nu nei

Mani Kaur · « **Reply #8 on:** May 03, 2014, 02:24:55 AM »

Quote from: gujjar NO1 on May 02, 2014, 10:11:11 PM

thanx gudiyee :smile:

Ur wc my bro :hug:

Gujjar NO1 · « **Reply #9 on:** May 03, 2014, 11:42:58 AM »

Quote from: ਪੰਗੇਬਾਜ਼ ਜੱਟ maan on May 03, 2014, 12:22:20 AM

:excited: :excited: :excited: kisse nu nei

karde karde AAP nu hi vote karde

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Maa Di Lado · « **Reply #10 on:** May 03, 2014, 11:45:45 AM »

all are gud bt karam veer ji dia lines ch kujh menu meri life di jhalk mili so ma vote for pyara ji

_尺oยภคк_ · « **Reply #11 on:** May 03, 2014, 12:01:58 PM »

Quote from: laraki jatti on May 03, 2014, 11:45:45 AM

all are gud bt karam veer ji dia lines ch kujh menu meri life di jhalk mili so ma vote for pyara ji

tahdi shayari kithe a? :5:

Gujjar NO1 · « **Reply #12 on:** May 04, 2014, 07:18:36 AM »

Quote from: ღ Rounak ღ on May 03, 2014, 12:01:58 PM

tahdi shayari kithe a? :5:

eyna di shayari dosre topic vich aa

♥♥ ਗਭਰੂ ਚੋਟੀ ਦਾ ♥♥ · « **Reply #13 on:** May 05, 2014, 05:52:00 AM »

sadke jawa sarea te bhut hi waddia lines ne mere vlo ta sare hi jettu ne mainu ta pta ni chalda ki kise nu vote pawa par end ch mai AAP party nu vote pyi :D: :D: :D: just joking ,|| sare hi best ne .......

rabbdabanda · « **Reply #14 on:** May 09, 2014, 04:17:38 PM »

LASTDAYYY!!! MITROOO LAAA deo angoooda... napp deo button :D: :D:

na nashe nu na daaru..
paa deo vote jaarhu nu :dumlak:

ਮਾਨ ਸਾਹਿਬ · « **Reply #15 on:** May 10, 2014, 03:10:36 PM »

bhaut sohna likheya sareya ne.jo likhan da shonk rakhde ne ja jiha ne try kitti ah bhautwadiya ghal ah.sareya nu tan vote pe ni sakdi es lai ik hi vote ah jo ja rahi mere veer jehde nal kade ghal te nahi hoi ohda na ah ₦ł ₮ɆⱤ₳ Ɏ₳₳Ɽ ₥₳Ⱡ₳₦₲ JɆⱧ₳

ʍʊռɖǟ ǟɖɮ ֆʊɮǟɦ ɖǟ · « **Reply #16 on:** May 11, 2014, 04:48:42 AM »

Quote from: ਮਾਨ ਸਾਹਿਬ on May 10, 2014, 03:10:36 PM

bhaut sohna likheya sareya ne.jo likhan da shonk rakhde ne ja jiha ne try kitti ah bhautwadiya ghal ah.sareya nu tan vote pe ni sakdi es lai ik hi vote ah jo ja rahi mere veer jehde nal kade ghal te nahi hoi ohda na ah ₦ł ₮ɆⱤ₳ Ɏ₳₳Ɽ ₥₳Ⱡ₳₦₲ JɆⱧ₳

bai mai thnx nhi aakho ga kyuki vote ik chngi likht nu pauni chahidi aa na ki os bande nu jine likheya :)